I say this should be the end and she sacrafices her and her brothers life to kill zoom while sacrificing the flash

I think it would have been better if they had found zoom too and when she woke up he was in the med bay with her or if. It that that she ended up in another earth i know that theory from the flash show where there are different earths that all vibrate at different speeds so they never see each other you know it works kinda like that vibrating molecules through walls thing

This story is amazing please write more

Can you update soon? I know it's been more than a year but you can still update the story. Or make a sequel.

I love this story hopefully Jai gets his shot together lol

please update! I've been reading this story since forever and it hurts to know that you've never finished it and it was getting so good. :(
Your probably not reading this but please update. Good fanfictions like this are hard to come by.

I HATE YOU! I love the story but i hate you for not finishing it and letting us asside I will hate you untill you come back and finish this fanfiction. P.S. I made and used for the first time an acount just to say this to you, so make this worth it

Okay, this is bad, this is very very bad.

Awesome chapter! :D

I just started reading your story yesterday and I couldn't stop! The plot is amazing :) at first I was brokenhearted that Wally was dead, but he's alive and here am I haha I'm a little curious about Artemis do for a living. Anyway, I'm looking foward the next chapter already. Great story xx

Awww...Jai why? Hey you know there's also another tic where Jai becomes like Inertia (not exactly tho). It's pretty good.

Ha! I knew it was him! The old guy staring... Nice to see him still around and tough as anything.
You have no idea how excited I was to see an update and had to wait until I had enough time to read the whole thing at once. :D

YES! YES! THANK YOU! I thought that you have forgotten about fanfiction, I thought that you quit the fandom and I'm SOOOOOOO HAPPY that I was wrong! Gret chapter. I enjoyed it and look forward for the next!

This chapter was fantastic, I love how you put sportsmaster in, good twist

OH MY GOSHHHHHH. THIS IS PERFECT IT MADE ME CRY HOLY SHEET CAKES. YOU HAVENT CONTINUED IN THREE YEARS AND I'D PROBABLY MESS IT UP IF I ADOPT IT BUT CAN I? PLEASE?