ugh

That looked really interesting. To bad you didnt continue.

When you have the time, come back to this story. The concept is good, it just needs a bit more realization.

Kal is a dick.

Is this story dead? Are you dead?

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I Thank you could continue it as is seems fine so far to me, but then again I've never played ME but I have watch SV though and your concept seems fine cause in the episode where Clark sees his future from the blind lady he knew this would happen eventually, so he is coping in his own way.

So by your story start Lois could show up as in the episode they burry doomsday lois gets a hold of the legion ring and goes into the future. I mean you say he found records of her working at the planet, but by that point she had already worked at the planet. Also how could she had come back from the alternate future if clark was buried with doomsday.

Hey I just stumbled on this fic. I think it is a cool idea. I think I would like it if you made Kal and shepard the same person. I think the over powering thing could be solved by have him loose a lot of his powers after being under ground for 170 years and then say that there is some sort of sun filtering over a lot of planets that block out harmful Solar radiation to prevent damage to other species. That stops him from being over powered as he can not quite get enough solar radiation to go beyond maybe his powers from early in the series, like when he could stop bullets but they would give him welts. Or maybe less if you think it is necessary. Furthermore he would probably get less solar radiation on ships so if he was to join the alliance it would be hard for him to get super charged. That being said I would love it if at least once Kal went Superman on a fleet of Reapers. Also remember that while Kal could easily wipe out the reapers if they decided to all fight him by a yellow sun, or god forgive a blue sun, he is only human under a red star, and he cannot be everywhere at once. The reapers can attack hundreds of systems at once while Kal can only protect one.

It has been a long long time since you posted on this story, or any story for that matter. But I love this concept and wished that you would have continued it.

I liked the premise. It had promise. I disliked his attitude in the second chapter.

I like the start to the story you've got so far, and think having Kal join Shepard is the better idea. Also, just because Kal is powerful enough to take out Reapers on his own doesn't mean he's a dues ex machina. He's only one guy and can't be everywhere at once, and presumably needs a ship to get around (at least for really long distances). Hope you continue the story sometime.

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I rarely find stories that have me this interested from the beginning. This is definitely one of them. Hope you decide to continue writing it. My vote would go for continuing it as it is.

Hey there is nothing wrong with a curbstomp story sure he can easy take out all infantry and tank units and some starships dont know how well against a reaper but even if all that its not like he can be every where at the same time and take out all reapers so you can still have some story or you could have kal-el only help when the team is in a need