| Reviews for The Missing Pieces |
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   BluetoYellow chapter 1 . 5/19/2014 Awwwwww I like this kind of story :D Please continue this ! I love AoKise so much |
| taruto chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 You write good! And at first i didnt like the odea that they both had already kids (and that Kise's wife passed away only 6months ago, like how much Kise still thinks about her and stuff) but damn they are so cute! \(/)\ Please update sooonn! |
| Mizuki-chin chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 Sounds like a great story, I'm excitited for the next chapter :) Please update soon *-* |
| notapieceofcake chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 AWWW! Their stories are so saad!... But the kids are so figgin adorable! I love them! ... Ehehe... For ome reason, I find ther name Daisuke to be erotic...wiered, right?... but I dunno, for some readon, this name so damn attracts me... Aominecchi's wife was a damn w****... Sorry about that... Well, damn, I'm sorry I can't be muh of a critic Author-san, coz I love ur story and the way you write... I got confused in some parts I think coz of the grammar, but that's about it Lovely fic! |
| keiko-uchiha chapter 1 . 12/20/2012 This sounds interesting. How old is Kises's little girl? |
| sumire chapter 1 . 12/15/2012 I love this kind of story Looking forward to the next chapter. (P.s: Kise's children would be as cute as Kida and Mami lol ) |
| EponineRin chapter 1 . 12/17/2012 Aha! I knew it! I was like. Wait that name? Durarara? And I was right! Great story. And yay for none a angsty-ness! |
| mypastnobodybussiness chapter 1 . 12/16/2012 can't wait to read more XD |
| AppleTea chapter 1 . 12/14/2012 Love it! Please continue! |
| ktlicious chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 more of this! 33333 |
| Lylia00 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012 You're right there's too much angst, although I like some of them XD. It's so cute and nice, can't wait till the romance (lol) please keep writing! |
| cipuz chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 Yaayy,,Aokise happy story :D They're so cute! I cant wait for the next update! |
| Infinite Skye chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 I agree, Aokise definitely has by far the most angst in this fandom, I'm glad this doesn't seem to be heading in the angsty direction however? XD Right now, I don't have much to say (crits wise) other than that this is quite promising. The pace is great and so are the mood and emotions. I love how you use dialogue to convey their thoughts instead of just using narration. You also don't seem to have any grammar issues so far either SO for now, keep up the good work and update soon! |
| hitomi65 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 nice story |
| PigeonWife chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 Yes! Some more fluffy AoKi in my life! Ofcourse angst is hood but balance is always best I'm really looking forward to the developments to this story I can smell the sugar sweet fluff a mile away! (and perhaps some hurt/comfort? lol) Eagerly awaiting your next update 3 |
