| Reviews for Winter's Discontent |
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   Althea Sirius chapter 7 . 5/26 I feel like a lot of fault is being placed on the Lunar prince. |
| Althea Sirius chapter 4 . 5/26 And... time travel. Joy. That Aster was the past Aster if my knowledge is correct. |
| Althea Sirius chapter 3 . 5/26 I feel like her wearing those clothes kinda botches her character. Mischiveous, free spirited, curious, fun loving. A simple hoodie and well wore pants fit the character where as leather jacket and shoes defeat the concept of the character. Acting as wind breakers, when it's shown Jack loves the wind. As for the shoes, well, being barefoot is also very canon to the character. Being a winter spirit(sprite), even varying temperate places like those on the equator don't get that hot during their fall/winter, so her wearing shoes is kinda useless. As for sharp objects or buildings, callouses are a thing and even then Jack doesn't walk all that much, prefering to have Wind carry him. I'm not trying to be mean, just pointing out things that could help for future reference. So, it's just easier to imagine this version wearing more "feminine" versions of her male counters clothing. That and she'd technically be shorter depending on where she was from. |
| Demi clayton chapter 7 . 11/24/2019 I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you. |
| Demi clayton chapter 7 . 8/27/2019 I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you. |
| jaminjess8 chapter 7 . 2/20/2016 Ah please continue this story because i love the movie so much! |
| SoulMore chapter 7 . 1/3/2016 FAN!~ |
| PrewalShadeX chapter 7 . 4/12/2015 Awesome! Please update soon! |
| Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 7 . 3/2/2015 Annnnnnnd you go for the stinking Cliffhanger... well at least your updating this work of art, keep it up PLEASE |
| AyameKitsune chapter 7 . 3/2/2015 Awesome. More please! |
| Elasour chapter 6 . 1/3/2015 I hate and pity Pitch |
| Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 6 . 8/22/2014 ITS BEEN A YEAR PLEASE UPDATE this is the first time i Seen a Jackie that is still in character and yet truly personifies Winter COME ON ALREADY PLEASE this story as a realistic and dangerous feel to it unlike others... makes me want to see what Pitch is going to do |
| frostbite04122001 chapter 6 . 7/18/2014 come on update someday |
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 6 . 5/30/2014 Update soon, please! |
| Delighted Laughter chapter 6 . 5/18/2014 I really love this, it's the only Fem!Jack I've actually respected and your writing is great. "Becoming less neutral" was an awesome line, and I love how you've made Jacqueline stand up for herself more than Jack did in the movie. It was only when I got to the end that I realized it's been so long since you updated, and all I can say is that I really, really hope you come back to this story soon. |
