Reviews for The Hokage Of The League
thegrison chapter 11 . 8/27
You know I am very curious how the trees & insects would help the island float. Only the mangrove trees can live off of salt water. All the others would die within a week. Insects would dig tunnels and such in the ground but that does NOT change anything. The weight is the same and those are not real air pockets. It would been better to have the island bottom shaped like a frisbee or upside down bowl and filled it with air. Better yet have seaweed or ocean plants holding it up around the edge and have seaweed hold it with mangrove trees around the edge too. There are few types of mangrove trees he could use.
Branwen Yang chapter 8 . 8/26
Such a shame you ended this, it was looking very promising as one of the best stories on this site by far.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/4
Well I was reading this for the reason that I thought he wouldn’t join the justice league because of its no killing policy and you even had him say that earlier but now he joins? F*ckin waste of time reading wow
nicholascaldwell959 chapter 9 . 7/5
Question Will naruto tell the league about the Tailed Beasts
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3
Actually laughed out loud when Batman turned around and he was gone lol that’s what he gets for doing that to everyone
Re Lovely Lover chapter 8 . 6/14
I thought it was setting up for Selina and Pamela. Maybe Volcana. Dont know why Kara aside from a clear preference despite seeing her once with the author having her needlessly popup at the farm in the story.

Unless that barrier sapped him I cant fathom how he'd be drained. Theres nothing he did that even compares to the 4th war in chakra usage and he didnt use any higher mode that was mentioned.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 7 . 6/14
Kinda wish he snuck up there and blew the mothership apart having a clone down below he switched places with after.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 4 . 6/14
Nice chapter.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 6/14
I couldve sworn there was a habit of having the apprentices speak more than one language.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 6/14
Shame another story dropped and below 100k too.

Found it amusing that Yin and Yang were mixed up. Fairly good chapter though.
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 4/18
You don't have an excuse for giving even a single other person chakra. The only thing that makes this story special is Naruto is a chakra using ninja introducing himself and his powers to a new world. It was a st*pid idea to nerf the only narrative this story has for a love interest who UNARGUABLY DOESN'T NEED another power!

And the convenience of everything was doubly annoying. Of course he bumps into someone connected to superman his first minute in town. Of course she has chakra. Of course a villain decides to attack at that exact moment. And finally, of course she would need The Hokages help. He was there afterall, what were you going to do have them meet and not introduce the Hokage? ...

It was all very contrived. But the chakra thing has no excuse and it shouldn't have happened.
StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 4/18
Please don't call it a superhero outfit. What are you doing? Suiting up might be this worlds thing but it wasn't in his. They just dressed that way so don't have him call it his superhero outfit. They're just his clothes.
K1B4ND chapter 5 . 2/28
Ugh... A sword, I hate these weapons. To overused just like the thing the sandaime hokage used.
I'm not completely sure, but what I am sure of, is that kenjutsu doesn't mean sword technique, but more than likely armed technique.
As for Sasuke, he never used a katana, it was a chokuto, contrary to the katana, the weapon is used for a defensive stance, with the blade positioned in the reverse, against the arm the user.
Seriously why a katana? The trench knives are perfect...
Druto chapter 1 . 11/27/2019
Awesome start
Ahmed Maged chapter 2 . 9/23/2019
This is alittke cliche
So the moment he sit foot in the city all this happen?
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