Really good.
I wish this have more chapters.

Holy crap. That ending though! That was awesome!

Your ending was perfect! That's all that I can say. :)

Wow. This is so good. This is exactly how I imagined a path that Snow might have taken and you have written it brilliantly. Without her love for her huntsman she has fallen.

Holy SHIT! So she basically goes all Ravenna II on us, more or less! Yikes! Geez! XPP That's a very interesting, thought-provoking, yet heartbreaking way to look at it! XD LOVE this, though, all the same! It was SO well-written and oddly in-character, despite the change in direction! *U* LOVE this! Rock on! :D

I always enjoy dark fics and this one was very interesting to read. Although I get that it's one-shot, I wish there would be more chapters to come. It is complete as it is though. Good job! :)

This is so great!

oooOooo. Dark, but great! I love the way you wrote this..how Ravenna almost lives inside of Snow White. Very nice work, indeed. :)

OOooo I liked it. It was really good. :)

A really interesting piece. I enjoyed reading it. :)