"Live for me, Toothiana." The exact moment I burst into tears. Dear Moon, this was so sad and bittersweet. My heart is in pieces. Amazing work

Absolutely love the story!

Poor Pitch. He's my favorite RotG character.

I like it! Although from my understanding I think North was told about Pitch's past, So with that, I think Noth already knew.

I've read the first two books and they were pretty good, but it didn't really give much into Pitch's past. Great work, better than mine by far!

( btw nice drawings on DA )

nice

That ending tore me up... I cried... you need to do sequel where they get Pitchinr back for good.

Wow! Good story! And a tragedy, which is my favorite kind. Really well written.

Her name was Emily Jane.

It was... interesting

Oh, my, goodness. You just shattered my heart... I love it. I have been reading this for the past few days because I try to make good stories last, and yet I have finished it too soon. I don't really have much credibility to offer with this review, so you may disregard some of these points...
I loved the story, where it picked up from the movie, how it carefully traversed the edges of Pitch's past, and how you added a little romance, action, and of course angst to go with. The guardians seemed very in character, as was Pitch, and though I don't really know him, Kozmotis seemed pretty in character as well. You kept me guessing, I never knew exactly what was going to happen next. Your transitions between the different character's points of view were very smooth and clear. Dialog was incredibly fun to read. You sucked me in with emotions and an seemingly intimate view of the characters, you felt like you knew them. The ending in my opinion was great; when Mother Nature first told Tooth the world was out of balance, I knew Pitch had to come back. Also with Fanfic's you often have to put everything in the story back where you found it, and you did this magnificently. Having Koz leave, while in a way still be there was lovely.
I love Pitch and in the 1st Ch. where he first reacts to Tooth was great. I have always loved his kind of sarcastic, dark sense of humor? Charm? What is it exactly? I'm not sure but I think you captured it perfectly. Then when he changed into Koz I missed Pitch, but with I the help of your next chapters I quickly got over it and fell in love with Koz and his honest, good-for-the-sake-of-good nature. Then of course the realization that Koz has to turn back into Pitch left this nice big hole in my heart and this empty feeling for Tooth. It was very well done, you felt like you were right next to Koz begging him not to leave. Then all the angst, hits you like a tidal wave and then is sweetly quelled a little by your ending. I was tearing up when Koz spoke and then nearly laughed aloud at Pitch's complete bewilderment at the situation.
Well that was kind of a long review... sorry about that, if you made it through all of that I applaud you. Hopefully you find some of this information helpful or at least inspirational. I am aware this post is a few years late from when you originally uploaded the story; so if you do not actually get this, well at least it was a good story.

This story is too beautiful. It's so amazing that made me write in English, Ohhh god, really had to leave a review. I dont have words to describe all that your story make me feel. Love this couple too much when I finish reading this. Thanks for your lovely contribution. You're rock!

From Mexico, with love :3

So sad, but I loved it nevertheless :')

Oh my... So beautiful.. So sad, yet so touching. Please, if it's not a bother, could you write a sequel? Only if you wish, of course, but i think those two deserve a happy ending.

I heard her name was Seraphina...