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Awesome story dude :) n we all gotta keep hoping n one day it'll happen

Huh nice story I wonder if FP will ever find out

Im a fan of flinn fubblegum and finnceline so i aint mad

I've always been into FinnXMarceline more than any adventure time pairing.

I love this and really like the chapters so far I cant wait till you write more I just love

Great stuf, you have a good way with words,keep it up :)

It is the best ship for AT, except for the current age of Finn. .

Honestly Finn and FP is just as unlikely as endgame pairing at the rate their relationship is going anyway, no character and she's just a plot device, but it's not like that still can't change, all 3 of the girls still have a fair chance since season 7 (or 10 if money is good (it is)) is a whiles away.

oh yeah this is a review still, good job!

Ah man i really liked fp but at least this wont happen in the show but i lime the story hopefully fp dosent get killed while trying to kill marcie

good chappie love the story

dude this story fricking rocks :D
i love where you're going with this
please don't stop with this man, its awesome.

Keep on the finnceline coming

Just don't make anyone crazy evil like tons of people have done in the past on this site.

i love this its an awsome story