I've kind of gotten over my Percy Jackson phase, but this seemed pretty good, so I decided to check it out. And it is. Good, I meant.

Ethan Nakamura was an interesting addition to this fic. He usually isn't present in these type of stories, but you made it work. And Nico as an Italian mafia member? *raises eyebrow* Somehow, I can see it. Especially if he's wearing a fedora.

Yeah, pretty good job. I'm looking forwards to seeing what you do next! :)

Pretty cool, kinda dark though. I like it please update!

Plz more, can you clarify what happened with Ethan? Also you should make it so that nico runs into percy while doing something illegal like murder or something, he nearly gets caught by the cops and percy helps him and they become bros.

AAACCCK I'm starting to love this story already!

This is a really amazing story. You kept everything so natural, and even if the characters weren't exactly 'themselves' (Grover being hungover was hilarious though,) you didn't force anything upon them and kept it realistic. Keep on writing!

This is brilliant! Don't give up on it! — JDF

Never know Ethan is japanese…..

Update please! It's really cool. )

an interesting interpretation... keep it up and up date soon

Awesome chapter, update soon, please! :-)

I love it Musie-Blossom, I can totally see what's happening in my mind.

Hey...you...yeah...you...UPDATE. Okay sorry about that. Great story. Original and I need to know more!

YAY! AN UPDATE! FINALLY!

...What was the fire and the ticking noise!? But good, *nods head*, very very good indeed.

Worst joke ever ugh. JK I LOVE YOU.