oooohhh boy
oh this was good
I love it

and the end omg
when she realised what they just did and panicked because she can't mess this up and what if she does
and he is there and calms her down
oh wow okay

this is so good I am emotional
and also dead it's fine

god how do you find the words and put them together like this it's amazing oh wow

-Anja

holy shit. Wow, that was just so brilliant, so well written, so goddamn hot. I'm so glad I discovered this story. Seriously, this is the so freaking good, I can't deal right now. Absolutely perfect; every word, every sentence and description is just perfect. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece.

hothothot

Nice and hot one

Unreasonably hot. Seriously wow.

I don't have words for how great this is, even if the situation is an ole cliche ;-)

Great shortie. Thank you.

Wonderful, as always :-)

Wow...reaching for ice water now.

Beautiful, as always. And sexy as hell.

Thank you.

Seeing the gif AFTER reading this fic made it all the more hot. I'm like gasping for air here. My heart is hammering in my chest. HOLY HELL THAT WAS HAWT. STILL NOT OVER IT! I need a husband like fucking yesterday so we can try this. Probably top 3 M fics EVER!

I lost count how many times i have read this and my reaction is always the same, I NNED THE IMMEDIATE AFTER! :)

Here's the thing, Nic... I love this fic. It's been on my fave's list for forever, since before I knew just how nice it was to get reviews... and I love it. I love it SO hard for so many reasons.
Let's name some:
1. Motel "trope" made so fucking new.
2. From behind. They didn't even kiss or *look* at each other. *Unf*.
3. Amazing words telling an amazing story.
x

Oh that image was wonderful to inspire such beauty as this, cause... Ahhhh. But for me it went beyond them getting together, you took moments like this one
There is a moment of absolute stillness, their bodies poised, their harsh breathing the only sound that reverberates through the room, and she feels as if her heart is going to leap out of her chest at any moment
and i felt like my own heart was going to explode because of your words!
thanks

I read this everytime it appears in my dash and i always keep hoping for a second chapter. Anyway..., this is super hot. Love it!

Wow. That was an incredible one shot and the gif...holy hell that was hot. Gave me a whole new perspective on the story.

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