did not like it as much as the prequel. got confused midway. too much happening haphazardly. it gave me a headache. still managed to complete it.

Interesting and complicated - but it does build very nicely on what you established.

I thought it was very interesting that you made Heimdale and Sif Harry's children... biological or otherwise.

Very interesting. Trasks' Cyberman army versus The Doctor. The rules for Doctor Potter also very interesting. Hope growing up out of time - kind of Mary Sue - but lots of power in this story - and she didn't take over the story. She had something important to do, like many of The Doctor's companions. Also living a life.

Great follow-up and follow-through for this chapter.

Interesting plot twists.

Good plot point follow-ups with human moments and interactions.

Ah. And here I thought HG was for Hermione Granger... but perhaps that's what Hermione Granger was for HG - quicksilver - Hermes.

Heavy stuff. Well played out. Thanks for sharing and continuing.

Interesting Thor plot twists here.

Very good stuff overall.

Good plot moments, character moments and follow-up, follow-through.

Good plot follow-up.

Okay, now considering the time jump - I really, really didn't expect you to do the Highlander thing - Harry of course has "the Prize" as the Master of Magic or as the Master of Death (or the combo). I am kind of glad you went back to Harry's young adult life - you earlier mentioned that Xander had Fawkes as a companion for three-thousand years, and I guess it is kind of amazing that future Harry can remember nearly four-thousand years of marriage with Hermione and Daphne - and that you may dramatize a little more of his younger life.

I don't know if you can still edit chapters - but Potter can phase the institute to another plane, I think is what you meant, not remove it from this phase?