I write a sequel thos story keeps better Nd better

This was great read! Great job for your first story!

Brilliant start :) I look forward to reading on! Definitely much better than most noobies like myself. (Eh noob... Not said that in ages!)

The ending made me cry and I really really really really really really really really hope you have a sequel because YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME WITH THAT ):

Its hard to write a review when you feel forced to and only long and sophisticated texts are considered a "proper review", so I'll just let it be and write a insufficient and therefore irregular review:

Thank you for the awesome story :)

Awesome! Such an awesome idea...

This was good. You should definitely write more. Maybe not a sequel, but more fics in general.

good story like it

I Dont like what u did to naruto but it is a good story though

Awesome.

That was an impressive, touching conclusion. Well done. I certainly hope someone might be able to write a sequel.

(By the way, you might want to go back and fix the spelling of Sakura’s family name.)

Man, if I could write a sequel for this I would. You've established a strong set up for one definitely. I love the last conversation with Naruto, it still seems to greatly hunt at him coming back somehow, even if that's not the intention. I also like the idea of Sasuke establishing a spy network out of the Sound, I see it as a neutral party that would be open to the highest bidder as long it doesn't clash with Sasukes morals honestly. Makes for good drama if he sold Leaf info to other villages. Again, I wish I could do a sequel.
And the tailed beasts joining up makes sense, Naruto never united them like he does in the manga. Sure this story is AU but I could see it happening. And your uniting the Kages kind of puts this back into canon, I could seethe war happening as it goes in the original, just without Naruto and Kabuto being the big bad.
Anyways, a fitting and touching end to the story. I really enjoyed it and will keep an eye out for anything else you do and a sequel if anyone ever chooses to!

I'm interested it. It's an interesting challenge. So I accept the challenge to make an awesome sequel. I will not disappiont you.

I can't wait I have faith that your finale will be awesome. :)

AWWW Man i hoped that u were going to write a sequel and I know for a fact I have zero capabilities of actual writing a story and I know that I will surely get distracted and not update for 3 months. I know the story will not be the same if you do not write a sequel but I'll understand. Create many more stories in the future!