That was very intense... There was so much feeling. It was so easy to imagine this exact scenario. Everything was so vivid... Thanks for sharing this...

You should make one were Emma goes insane and talks to her self you know she goes full on crazy

Oh, your story is totally different from the one by StgMac, and it's at least just as good) I love this sexual and intimate twist of heartholding, I've never read anything like that before)
Anyway, thanks a lot for writing)

this was a hella of a journey. I really really really loved it. your writing is so great, so fluid, so meaningful. it was a great experience. this story is certainly one of my faves now. congratulations! xx

this is a beautiful way to aproach this couple. congratulations! ;) amazing!

I'm so glad you decided not to keep this to yourself, it's an amazing story. Full of emotion and so descriptive I could almost feel it!
Thank you.

This is so good and so beautiful. The second to the last sentence just one example of both the goodness and beauty. My favorite section is when you describe them laying in bed together. You completely elaborated and articulated what I felt from the beginning about their relationship. Its almost un-describable but you did it.

It's been so long since I wrote a review I almost forgot where the button / box to do this was. Maybe thats a sign of how truely stand out your story is as I pretty much read ff every night. Not sure if that makes me a sad case but regardless. I hooked out my login again so I could say wow- loved your world view and how you re crafted the characters we know to give so much more. Hope something new is inspiring the writing in you as you definitely need to be read. Be proud of your output and don't judge yourself so harshly, your fic certainly has broad enough legs to stand up on its own against anything else even remotely similar. Bravo

Terrific story

Hi, I just finish to read your story and the one you named in your A/N (Beautiful by SgtMac) and honestly I totally prefer yours !
It was so breathtaking and captivating, I've never read something like that on this part of the show before ! You've got me totally transported by your story and I could never forget it...
Honestly this is one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read.
THANK YOU SO MUCH !

this was so sweet i can't even
you made my day a whole lot better

This is one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read.

This is a wonderful, scary, loving, exciting story. Congrats on it! Loved it

WOW. Wow, wow, wow. This was so beautiful. So, so, so beautiful. I don't even have words for this. Beautifully written, completely in character, a lot of tension, wow. I kinda of want a continuation of this... Like the "next morning" or something, lol. Just saying...

Wow! Beautiful story!