Continue please.

After ?

Wow, this fic is really good.

I can see you haven't updated it in years. Don't know if it's real life issues, lack of inspiration, or you simply lost interest, but it's still a pity, because you left me *dying* to know where the story was going to go.

Anyway, thanks for the escapism you provided, and hope you'll update it again someday.

Aside from the slightly confusing pacing, which had me reread to catch the scene change, this story was a nice ride.

Do you have any plans to continue this story? It's really good, and I'd hate to see it unfinished.

Oooo, does he get a Phoenix Down?

Oh my gosh, I just marathoned this entire story in one go, and I absolutely love it! It's well paced, well developed, and it draws in the reader. This story is incredible, and I'm crossing my fingers for an update!

The whole story is AMAZING! Please write more chapters. I like this story and it's the best story I have ever read!

nice work

This is a great story! Please please please update!

hmhmhm XD dumbledore denied permission to riku but he didn'tt say anything about sirius doing it.

Ah I just got back into KH fanfiction and ugh. I love this. I've never been a die-hard fan of Riku until Dream Drop Distance. And this is a most beautiful story. 3 Please continue.

I really like this story. It's clear that you really give thought to how the plot would be driven by the characters, instead of just manipulating the characters to a plot that really doesn't fit them. Keep up the good work!

One suggestion I'd give is to pay closer attention to each character's unique "voice". The characters are different people, and thus should have different word choices, even for expressing the same idea. Give them different mannerisms and ways of phrasing things, keeping in mind that each individual voice should reflect the personality of the character. You have been doing this to some extent, but I think you could still strengthen that aspect of your writing-especially making sure that your most intelligent characters (Riku, Hermione, Dumbledore) don't all sound the same.

Overall, though, I really enjoy this fanfic, and I look forward to the next chapter!

*hugs Riku* it's okay Riku, I'll help you with your plan.

I'm so ready for whenever the update comes! I so happen to also be curious about whenever Voldemort may encounter Riku. Who knows, he may even find curious potential in the keyblade user to become of his use. Your writing flows extremely well; I can picture the scenes with no awkward pauses or gaps. I may have forgotten, but does Riku know about Parselmouths? Just curious for his thoughts on it, that's all.
Looking forward to more!