Loved this fic, I thought Tora was a super realistic character and I think all the relationships (especially with Zuko) progressed very naturally. Please keep writing!

Hated this chapter. Less than halfway through it, I almost gave up on this fic entirely. Please remove it. No one cares about rando characters and their troubled pasts. I’ve been liking the fanfic up until this chapter though!

idiot, moron, imbicile, nincompoop, dumbass, microcephelic addlepate. this should be her chant for Zuko

Behold, Emperor Momo of the Momo dynasty, his Momoness, the supreme earthbender of the lemur nation!

I would love to be a jerkbender! when someone is being a jerk, I just wave my hands and they fly away never to be seen again

Great chapter! I recognized the Luna Lovegood quote you threw in there!

Will there be a sequel?

You literally said you live in a nation where water benders are killed on sight. Why do you hate your father for getting you out of that place?!

Can't wait for next book

I know that Im commenting on something someone posted a while ago, but this really makes me angry. To whichever "guest" that wrote something as stupid sounding as "halfatar" maybe you should do some research. There are several novels on this site that have an oc dual bender. If you think your the only one who was brilliant enough to come up with the idea of bending opposing elements, then I truly pity your astounding lack of intelligence. unless the author copied your work word for word and only changed the name, then do us all a favor and check your privelage.

Thank you for posting this story. i recently found it and thought it looked good, but i was unprepared for how invested i became. i read it all in a day, and i eagerly await the next book. i have one question about the name of the next book, though; will it be called Green, or something else? and i cant wait until the Gaang meets the Boulder.

I absolutely loved reading this. I hope you continue on with Books 2 and 3.

It’s back! (Yay). But is it here to stay?

I'm gonna be honest, had I been in Tora's shoes here, I wouldn't have just been OK with getting smashed into a wall. I would have been terrified of Aang for a long time.

I am sorry about what is happening. You are an excellent author. By the way can you update soon? It is already September and you made this authors note in February. I love this story so please update!