LOVE IT!

This is amazing, and you right so so so well. Please don't ever stop writing, no matter what it is. The world needs more talent like yours.

This was completely awesome!
It wasn't rushed or forced, as so many of the stories for this pair tend to be.
The writing was wonderful, and the story flowed beautifully.
Excellent job!
I look forward to reading more of your lovely work!
Starfyre

Can I say this is one of the cutest and sexiest Loke Lucy story I have read so far? Bravo, you made my day:)

SO MUCH FLUFF. I LOVE IT.

n'awwwwwwww

I gotta say, this is probably the best LoLu fic I've seen. I mean it, this was great. :) *claps* Bravo!

Wtf! Clif hanger xD

Hehe

That was so innocently cute and steamy at the same time! I loved it! Definitely a fav of mine.

hm...i might consider a rating bump... other than that... :DDD EPIC!

Loved it *A*

Oh my... I wasn't expecting such a sweet OS! I truly loved it! I appreciate your writing skills and it's surprising that I don't even feel a little bit bored because I casually do when I read long paragraph. Congratulations!
The thing I love the most is that you made your Lucy and Loke look like the real Lucy and Loke. I mean their personalities were well transcribed! Asdfghjkl I hope I could write more about how I love your fanfiction but I'm out of words.
The only thing I would add to make this fanfction flawless would have been a lemon. Haha, joke! I enjoy lemon but I think adding a lemon at the end of such a lovely OS would have ruined it
For a first fanfiction I should say that I'm amazed!
Have a nice day

Wow I love your writting style! It's so much fun to read! Sitting here on mid watch on my ship, reading this on my phone, is a real treat! Awesome job!

Kawaii!