Great blend of history, mystery and crime. Good job!

Thoroughly enjoyed this. Great characterisation and a genuinely gripping storyline. Fab stuff

A very exciting, and enjoyable adventure featuring the team. I liked how Tony came through for Tim, and the wrap-up was perfect. Very nice work.

I enjoyed that! Looking forward to checking out your other work. Thanks for sharing.

That was a thoroughly fun read! Thank you!

loved the history-well written; great characters; thanks

WHOO! Go write your story Thom E. Gemcity!
Excellent fanfiction. Totally had me captivated. By the way, you got Abby down perfectly, and I think your Tony. He's still irritating, funny, and a smart-aleck, but a bit more protective. I like that

Tony is an excellent investigator. He just hides behind jokes

Just as good the second time around!

I just HAD to read this one again...

McGee has no qualms about 'borrowing' Abby's Caf-Pow, and we all know he graduated to cupcakes a few seasons later... ;p

It's amazing how I can hear their voices in stereo in my head...

Glad you had Tony solve the trivia question, plus, I enjoyed the burger scene. :)

I like it that this seems to be set around season 3. I enjoyed the team dynamics more back then. My fave line is "If he were dead, he'd have to listen to them in their entirety", lol...
Jimmy is so totally spot on!

I know how I missed this, I was away on holiday, otherwise I would have definately followed it. You're one of my fave writers, impeccable vocab, easy style, snappy humour and perfect grasp of the character voices. I like you!
I have to say, you're devilishly good with details and it's a pleasure to read every line. :)