Reviews for hey pretty girl ! do you want to be mine
annamounce999 chapter 3 . 10/20/2016
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/2/2016
I haven't read this yet (and I'm not planning too) but I just want to say that your summary is bad.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/2/2015
I think naruto should i think she would look cute if them
Justine chapter 3 . 3/7/2015
I think he shoulded get ears and tail from kyuubi and please update
Winged-Ashes chapter 3 . 9/25/2014
It's interesting plz update soon I wanna know wat happens nxt
Karmin chapter 3 . 7/14/2014
She should have fox ears and tail!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/2/2014
Wowowow :D
kyuubi chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
EARS AND TAIL PWEESE
Gaarankogame chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
woow this looks really intereseting please update
livingspace chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
Please hurry and write... and also... MIDTERM EXAMS ARE NOT THAT HARD!
Please chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
Can you please update because I really love this fic.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
If I had known this mission was going to be my doom I would never have suggested it, but at the time I didn't realize how dangerous a simple C rank mission could become by revealing my secret which lead to my misery and my demise ... what you wrote didn't make sense sort of if you can change it to what i wrote...

this is really good just get a beta to help with your English a bit you're not bad at writing or English its just some mistakes...

can't wait till the next chapter!
OrangeROSEandWiltingVIOLETS chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
keep updating and yes a tail and ears would be awesome
myheartisopen62 chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
I like the chapter & all but I feal as if u should take ur time when typing some words
&
Proof read your self to make shur it maks sens to others
No ones perfect & I make writing & spelling mistakes too in the stories I write in my journal
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