CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE PLEASE DO ANOTHER V/18

PLEASE! YOU'RE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR EVER!

awsoome story. very good

hey hey it's funny and good write more score!

great story,

android 18 is my fav character in dragon ball too,

this is one of my fav story that hav 18/vegeta as a pairing!

plz write more 18/vegeta or marron/trunks

(they are my fav couple in dragon ball!)

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg ur beginning is SO like the ff im working on itz so scary i guess i'll hav 2 start ovr...lol

nice story really sad but the endings a little...happy happy joy joy but itz good!

Honestly, I am a fan oof k/18 4 life, but this story was just so well written I had to give it a review. Keep up the good work!

O.o That was so.. sad... i loved it, but it was just.. yeah, sad.. .

I just love EighteenXVegeta Fanfictions where they fall in love..You should write a sequal to this, and make it whre Eighteen and Vegeta are married, and their working on having kids maybe the next story should be a NC-17 that would

Yeah I just love NC-17 stories!

Please at my request, write a sequel to this Fic it was really great, Vegeta finally came out with his emotions

It was so cute I just love it!

Hi it's me again, the one that requested the 2 more chapters, well anyway I thought the ending was great. I know you probably won't but when you start on another fic could you possibly email me to tell me.

That is one malfunction family. It reminds me of soap operas.

I hope the news of Marron killing her own mother will finally be register into her mind. I knew she was going to do that even before I read it, but I was hoping otherwise.

Poor, poor Vegeta. Right when he finally accepts his feeling for her, she's gone. That is just sad.

What can I say, I can't wait to see what happen to Vegeta. Was the emotional pain too much that he just fainted, or there is going to be a miracle happening next?

Arg, I forgot to add this little note to the previous review. That is so ooc even for Vegeta. A guy like him wouldn't cry, but they might feel angry towards the culprit that hurt Juuachigou. That's just another suggestion.

Okay, now the review for this chapter. I find the part where Vegeta almost swerves into another lane amusing because of he got distracted. Men. Also, sounds like Juuachigou enjoys playing her part a little too much, eh? Vegy Wegy? My thoughts are exactly on what Vegeta thought too. My gosh, where does she gets her stuff, albeit I'm not complaining, it's hilarious!

I love this story so pleeeeease make at least 2 more chapters.

Kat: Goten shot Gohan, 18 and Vegeta, Vegeta works for Goku, WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO

Mirai Trunks: Yeah I know, freaky

Kat: BUT, I liked it, so update soony k

Try to make your previous chapters like this one. Skip a line for each character like when they are being introduced, talking, and whatnot. This way, it's not all in one or two botched up paragraphs, but each characters have its own line.

This is a great story so far and I love the plot because it's original. It's so simple, I don't know why no one has ever thought about it.

You might want to be careful of which 'were' and 'where' to use. You have a tendency to use the wrong one.

For example, "Vegeta was glad she couldn't see him, because his eyes where watering and he didn't know if he could stop them completely."

The right one should be 'were' and so far most of them should be 'were' and not 'where.' You only use 'where' if you're asking about someone's location, like, "Where are you going?"

Another suggestion is if you either put 'thoughts' when someone is thinking or use italic.

Well, that's all.

HURRY UP WITH NEXT CHAPTER!