Reviews for The Greatest Gift
mangomaus chapter 2 . 5/26
Thanks so much for this story!
I had planned to read the whole story at once, but now seemed like a good time on the clock as well as in the story to stop and continue tomorrow.
I really like your writing and Draco is really thoughtful about his presents, I believe. I liked it a lot.
With this review Im sending you an invisible Draco (as wanted), but Im sorry (or maybe not) to admit you wont get a visible one from me as I would keep a real Draco myself.
Have a nice day!
I know okay chapter 3 . 5/21/2018
The sex scene wasn't too bad. My only complaint is that it seemed a little quick from the time they got together, but I know other people are like that. Writing sex scenes stresses me out. Under this pen name I've never tried, even if I have written other things. My biggest problem is if I was going to write something there'd be absolutely no way it wouldn't be taken down immediately on this site.
I know okay chapter 2 . 5/21/2018
Sweet notes with the gifts.
I know okay chapter 1 . 5/20/2018
I'm amused. I hope he doesn't waste his chance.
eiralu chapter 3 . 5/14/2018
I'm perfectly happy reading every word you've written here. Young or not you've got a marvelous sorry telling skill. Plus these two are just prefect in your care. Well, done.
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 3 . 10/14/2015
Hahaha enjoyed this so much. You're frigging amazing. I can't belive you were only 14 when you wrote this. Smut and fluff both applause worthy ;) :D
my deathly hallows chapter 3 . 7/8/2015
Oh Merlin, this totally made my day, I totally looveed it thank you for writing this, Christmas came early
TheCauldron chapter 3 . 8/25/2014
awwwww! *melty feelings* so damn sweet i think i got cavities. ;) loved it!
Ichij0u chapter 3 . 8/16/2014
I'm sCREECHING!¡!¡! Not really though, it's a bit late and I think everyone is sleeping... You wrote better smut than me when I was that age, haha! Well, I wasn't here for the smut. I was here for the epic Drarry fluff. Truth be told, fluff is my weakness! It makes me blush as bright as Christmas decorations! Or something that is super bright... This is by far cutest thing I read today! Yes, I know I reviewed TMS not long ago but I was not kidding when I told you I was going to read your fanfics! But after this I am going to poison everybody in their sleep with too much Raid because I saw one tiNY FUCKING BUG THAT WAS CRAWLING ALL OVER MY PHONE!... Fuck, I'm itchy. I'll continue my saga later. Right now, I am going to curl up in the corner and wait for my friend to wake up to kill the bugs. :P
Belle A Lestrange chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
This was a really cute story. You did a really good job.
Belle A Lestrange chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
I really loved this chapter, although I don't understand why everyone is saying 'yeah'. It just doesn't sound right for any of the characters except maybe Ron.
Belle A Lestrange chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
This is a really intriguing chapter, only I don't see why Harry would be SO chirpy but there you go, and also, I can't see Hermione ever casually saying, "yeah" at the end of a sentence [inviting draco to the party] but other than I enjoyed it so far.
ShairaHisako chapter 3 . 1/9/2014
Love it. Great
ShairaHisako chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
So damn good. I absolutly love this chapter. It heaven.
It's fun, sweet, romantic and absolutly wonderful. Thanks for uploading
Carling chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
Really excellent. I can't believe you were 14 when you wrote it. As a mom I have to admit to feeling creepy at the idea of reading smut written by an underage author so I skimmed that part and just focused on the romance in the story. But all the rest of it was spot on, true to character despite the necessary deviations to make it a slash story. The only thing missing for me, since you were following canon so well, was any comment on why Hermione was with Blaise (excellent matchup by the way) instead of Ron. I really enjoyed Astoria in this. You took a shell of a character and gave her some sass and class. I've read your other work and knew you were good, I just had no idea your talent was in evidence at such an early age.
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