I read both of these stories in two afternoons. I love how time is twisting Sarah. I hope at some point you will continue this.

Oh wow! Absolutely love the storyline all the way from the 1st (As Easy Mayst Thou Fall) to this sequel... it’s soo deep, dark... intense and soo taboo... Absolutely love how obsessed and intense Jareth’s love for Sarah is ️ When Lisa appeared, I nearly had a heart attack! Thank you soooo much for not letting Jareth sway... Love love love Jareth’s jealousy with regards to Toby and Sarah! I really hope that you have not abandoned this intriguing story and praying, no begging, that you’ll update soon. ️ Thank you soo much!

I have loved this so far! I know it's been several years since you've posted anything, but know that I enjoyed it. Also thank you for the disclaimer on how Toby was feeling. It was a bit uncomfortable for a minute without that.

I hope you're well whatever you're doing. If you decide to pick this up again, I'd read it in a heartbeat.

Wished u would finish it, or work a sequel out after.

I'm posting this review for the entire story.

Wow. I love your characterization of adult Toby first and foremost.
I was a bit hesitant to keep reading when I sensed that he was attracted to Sarah, but kept on reading trusting that you knew what you were doing! lol. And I wasn't disappointed. Instead I found myself caught up on the story between the two of them and didn't even notice or feel the absence of Jareth until he showed up in the later chapters.
But mostly I really do love your Toby and I feel you have done him justice so far in character.
Do you still have a sequel planned for this story? Because the cliffhanger is driving me nuts and I'd love to see even more development between Jareth and Toby!

I loved both stories. Written well and development was very thought out. But...you left I hanging for years and years on w 7-2018. Saw you last wrote in 2015 on another Lab story too. Please...you should wind this one up some how or start a part 3. You are a very skilled writer, and your to good to stop.

As it's been a year since this was updated, most likely it has been abandoned. But I'm lending my voice to the others to continue and don't Leave us hanging.

I hope you have not abandoned this wonderful story.
Will toby gain magic and change into immortal as well?
Could sarah now have jareth's child aboveground?

Amazing. Hoping for another chapter in 2017!

I can't wait for the rest of the story!

Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I loved the prequel to this story. Just wanted to have you correct one thing in your notes. 1 Corinthians chapter 8 is about food sacrificed to idols, chapter 13 is the love chapter

I have read both of these stories in one day. I love the time, thought, and effort you've put into these. The Labyrinth was and remains a huge part of my childhood and adult life. And though this is fanfiction, it's easily believable as an extension or piece of the original. Thank you for this. Truely.

Ohh I see now what she's trying to do! She wants Toby to be like her and live in the labyrinth! Genius.

I've read it first a while ago, so had to go back a little to refresh my memory and I must say that it is pretty amazing how you've managed to cretae a sequel even more unique and original than it's predecessor. Such an interesting twist on the relationships, especially that of Sarah and Toby. I love your Toby. I am so looking forward to see him Underground with Jareth. I think I have an idea where are you going with this. I do believe that Sarah was on to him and that was one of the reasons she has decided to send him Below.
Thank you for the fabulous read!