A story beyond Voldyfart's end in a middle chapter with a full life, but not kid focused, although they are mentioned. A bit with the careers, marriage etc. A love story but no need for smut, despite the flirty moments. Overall... this story gets a 9.5 from me. It had just the right amount of HP to be recognized, but took on a world of it's own if just one change occurred. The bond that changed everything.

Amazing and beautiful story, definitely one of my favourites

never saw ron as a professional quidditch player

Ginny YES

if school is free - why the hell are pensive lessons so expensive

Harry has a connection with Dobby - BECAUSE HE SAVED HIS LIFE!

ALL fan fiction is AU so don't listen to people who say "that didn't happen in the books!"

Fan fiction should NOT be a rewrite of the books - they should be totally different plots!

poor granger...can't stand the thought of someone knowing more than her

good

How did the Death Eaters find the Burrow when ch. 2 said they made it unplottable?

I guess Molly never heard the old muggle saying, "A son is a son until he marries his wife, a daughter is a daughter for the rest of her life."
;)

I appreciate you showing Harry fall for Ginny a bit more than JKR does. Personally I don't mind her method of telling us it happened over the summer, but clearly it doesn't work for a lot of people.

I am loving your unique story. Tonks makes an excellent Fairy Godmother!

not many people can do a bond and not turn harry into some god killing machine that is basicly neo but my god if you did not do it in a smooth way and also unlike most you managed to make a desent ending other than the normal one chapter drone how harry got everything my main complaint is a simple one the sleep i lost from not been able to stop reading

Honestly this is the worst chapter of this entire story
the soul bond is so forced I nearly dropped this story here

Great story even third time around. just learn the meaning and spellings of ;comp"I"iment and :compl"E" ment to use them properly as you are still writing fics. I love your fics so hope that I have not hurt your feelings. take care and keep the ideas coming.