It is very obvious that you are very ignorant in matters of war, logistics and politics. The sheer lack of sense and realism your story embodies is mind boggling. Look at the human Covenant war despite humanity being outclassses and their planets glassed they still dragged out the war for two decades while the turian hierarchy with a fleet of about 30000 or more and a population of billions all of whom have military training are defeated in a matter of days, you display no strategic thought or insight and just brute force every engagement. My honest opinion is that this story is shit

Someone who has been knighted has the title Sir appended to the front of their name, no knight.

Delusioned, generic Turian Admiral; "Hah, they only have three ships, they may be larger, but that can be explained through lack of miniaturisation. They must not be advanced enough to build smaller."

Tactic. Officer; "Sir! The three ships are launching smaller vessels. They now have 31 one ships, most of them equal to our size."

sooooo, will this ever be continued, just asking out of intrigue. other than that its good

I like this story so far, good work! But there is one issue about weight of UNSC warships that you need to know:

Halo: Warfleet was recently released in the public and they have posted numerous new weight for warships, so an frigate weights between 0.92 to 1.1 million metric tons to 970 million metric tons for Infinity-class supercarrier.

So I'd suggest you to check Warfleet out so you can adjust the warships weight if you want to. It is true that Titanium is much lighter but you have to consider about other things that may weight more than norm, like superstructure being made out of different alloy (it was stated that it uses TR steel, so it'll be much more heavier), other stuff like MAC guns, missile pods, 50mm PDS, etc, you name it.

Don't listen to others. Write for yourself and those that enjoy your stories.

Quick question, I've noticed that the last update was marked at May 1, 2014. I was wondering if this rather, entertaining piece was cancelled, or going to be continued on in the form of one or more different story's. this comes merely out of curiousity as I would very much wish to see this tale continued. If it has been canceled then, while I wonder why. I do aplaud you for a well crafted story that I enjoyed heavily.

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(can't sign in) nice dude this story Is amazing so far hope you keep it up (puts thumb up)

Awww man, why is this not continued? Really like what you have done with this, just wish you would pick this back up.

how come every story that's good doesn't get updated btw love the story

Very good

Damn, such storis are my guilty pleasure. Love the curb stomping.

Shock and awe!

i love how OP humanity is, its fun to see turians get wrecked