Um... The expression is "knocked up." I like the story though, it's good.

I loved it!

I very much enjoyed the ending, didn't suck at all :)

Yes you do need to work on ending your stories more, but on the bright side the only way you will get better is by writing more. So that means hopefully there will be many more stories from you. YAY!
But I am glad everything turned out how they shouid have.

Ok I just read this whole story and all I can say is F-ING WOW! I love this story everyone seems to put John in the role Randy is in this story. It is nice to see this change. I have only just started reading your work but from what I have seen I'm going to lke it very much.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon Please!

*shocked* I-I can hardly talk

This chapter is on fire

You are awesome. i will explain this chapter with one word: AMAZING

WOW JUST WOW I was not expecting that to happen at all I'm shocked as heck

Excellent chapter...

It is still so hard for me to dislike Adam. I almost felt sorry for him though, your description of him broken was so good...only to see maybe he isn't as broken as he appeared...at least yet...that much time in isolation will get him though...I am wondering what will happen when he gets out...I hope Randy and Stephen are long gone by then.

I can understand why Randy needed to see Adam...but I also understand why Stephen was so worried, and he was right to be.

Well done with the emotions. Excellent writing.

Update soon please.

Poor Randy. I hope Stephen can convince Randy that what Adam said isn't true. :(

Please update. :)

It's bad idea to visit him, Randy.

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

Like before...I am not going to go back and review each chapter...but this is another brilliant story.

I was never that much of a fan of Sheamus (Stephen) until I started reading a few stories with him...mostly paired with Randy...I really like him now, at least in fiction lol.

This one was HARD for me, because I am a writer of Adam, who is my sweet little kitten that belongs to either Chris Jericho or Bret Hart...But...you did such a GREAT job with evil Adam...I am really impressed.

Aside from some typos and major spelling gaffs..(but then again we ALL do that)..you are truly gifted writer and weave excellent stories. I am quite impressed with your talent...and have added you to my favorites list.

I hope for an update to this story soon...there is so much left to be told!

I am emotionally exhausted from this one...again really great job!

Updaaaaaaaate this one