Reviews for Cracked Ornament |
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![]() ![]() Lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh so sweet thanks for the read |
![]() ![]() Reading Mentalist Christmas fics in nearly middle of July... What can be better? In any case, this was adorable and all around epic. The ending, hah! Thank you for this! I'll probably return this when festive time comes. |
![]() ![]() I had forgotten just how charming this story was! Thank you! p.s., will there be an hl christmas story for 2013? (shameless hint, shameless hing) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha I like that with the mistletoe! Well done! I really like your littele Christmas story! :D |
![]() ![]() Love it :D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that was cute! I liked that. Like the idea of Jane going to decorate Lisbon's house. And of course he would break in instead of doing things like a normal person. But since when has Jane ever been normal? I was especially touched by the fact that Jane didn't touch the Lisbon family ornament collection. I liked that he respected Lisbon's fragile family dynamic and knew when not to go too far. (If only he'd apply that in other situations.) Also liked the little story about Charlotte and the snowflakes, but what I really liked was Lisbon's offer to make snowflakes with Jane. That was so touching, and so Lisbon. Jane would hide mistletoe all around her condo, wouldn't he? I'm with Lisbon, I'd like to go on an investigation to find all the mistletoe. (Liked her sly comment about biological contaminants. _) Hope you had a Merry Christmas! Have a Happy New Year! Write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written with a great mix of humor and romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I think you wrote them pretty in character as well. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in favour of unofficial Christmas traditions, fyi. This was a perfectly fluffy piece, and I really kind of loved it. Jane planning on seducing Lisbon via strategically placed mistletoe is always fun. IT IS. Merry Christmas! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that castle reference by the way. Well done. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely tradition! A piece of Christmas fluff every year. I vote yes. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable! Great Xmas fluff! Perfect addition to holidays! Happy Christmas! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet. Loved it! |