Reviews for Take Two Round Two
ArkhCthuul chapter 1 . 7/24
Ah, yes, old nick is fucking scary.
Just ask Harry Dresden. Or the erlking. Or my be, if you're really brave, mab.
Eragon135790 chapter 2 . 7/22
great ff but a bit low on mc-view.
Guest chapter 37 . 7/20
REVIEWED. Thanks for the update! Also, there's a typo in the previous chapter near the end that says 'immidiately' or something along those lines instead of immediately.
Donthedarkdragon26 chapter 37 . 7/13
GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS! NO MORE YEAR LOG HAITUS! But hey, amazing chapter as always.
Eaglestorm27 chapter 35 . 7/13
I have a question since i know that you possibly planned to have an another sequel after that fan fic . Just How powerful Naruto would really become ? Would he still keep getting stronger in both skill and strength or he would just take a pause after some training ?
raider93 chapter 37 . 7/10
So glad you are back! Can't wait to hear more from you. Stay Safe!
dave chapter 37 . 7/7
Love this fic with all the crap Naruto gets in to. I would love to see a Harry Potter fic where the family interferes.
Guest chapter 37 . 7/5
So happy to see ya back, I love this story and I sincerely hope that you keep it going for as long as possible.
Napalmic Blueberries chapter 37 . 7/5
yaaassssss mmooorrrrrreeee give us more also yay your alive.
Thundershadow5 chapter 37 . 7/4
Welcome back :) Are we ever going to see Naruto take Kabuto on a dimensional field trip? ft. Edo Shodaime and Madara?
BetaSpectre chapter 37 . 7/3
Awesome, awesome. Wish I could say more.

Good writing. Awesome character development. 10/10 world building, truly astounding. 3/10 for the wait from the last chapter since this is my favourite story out of all those you've written. And genuinely fun to read.

Doesn't rot brains, 9/10.
Would definitely recommend.
Pucusi81 chapter 37 . 7/2
I've been waiting patiently for this chapter and it was a Hit!
The First Oracle chapter 37 . 7/1
Your explanation towards Karin's healing abilities is, admittedly, odd. It's a bit inconsistent, at least to me. Yes, Yin chakra does provide stabilizing effects to the mind and it can also be used for healing purposes, but to use the process as the source of Karin's power doesn't fit in my opinion. After all, the Senju and by extension, the Uzumaki, are naturally in tune with Yang chakra. They're all about vitality which is more attributed to Yang energies instead of Yin. The latter is more about control and imagination, in fact, I am of the opinion that Tsunade has diluted Senju blood and her Strength of the Hundred Seals was a way to compensate for it. On a side note, if this is actually the case for her, then that makes Mito a pseudo immortal since she has both natural regeneration (Yang) and her seal (Yin) when she activates the latter. It makes her one of the most durable opponents in the Narutoverse, just below Juubi Madara, who can actually restore lost limbs AUTOMATICALLY and a potential S-Class Shinobi in the same manner as Hidan. She's not exactly a powerhouse but she's almost impossible to put down, thus making her a constant threat in the battlefield.

I also applaud your decision to have Naruto suck at fuinjutsu, something I only remembered now (I want to smack myself silly since I've been following this story for two years already.) You have no idea just how much I wanted to tear my hair out everytime I read a fic that follows the logicHe's an Uzumaki, he should be talented with seals!" It's stupid, a cheap copout, and totally uncreative. If they want to make Naruto stronger, there are countless other ways to do it.

I'd like to express concern regarding your hint towards the Otsutsuki though. I don't think it would be wise to bring them in right now since we only know the bare minimum about them, even with the Boruto manga's current input (the anime's plot may have tainted the impression but it's actually good, its lopsided power levels aside). I wonder how you're going to up the stakes though. Looking at things, only an OC could provide the necessary villain since most of the characters are either at an impasse or amicable. That's not even mentioning just how bad of a spot the Canon villains are right now. Naruto has too much influence with important figures in the Five Shinobi Nations for them to tolerate their village's provocations of a potential World War. Danzo, even with Presence, can only do so much, and it's mostly politically. The Akatsuki is mostly fucked. I doubt Kabuto would even do anything since he's a become a more passive Orochimaru. He has enough idea about Naruto's journey to know just how much of a bad idea it is probe on the outer realms so he's limited to their current world.
CosmicSkies chapter 37 . 7/1
Amazing chapter, as per the usual! You're one of the best writers I know, published or otherwise.
G chapter 37 . 6/30
Great chapter. Have been waiting forever to see what happens next. I’m prepared to wait again but hopefully not quite so long. I wish well to everyone who reads this comment also to all who find this you’re awesome for reading this amazing fic. Enjoy and read the story again to see what you missed in the glorious bullshit that is this masterpiece. I know I’ve read it atleast 3 times and am still finding new stuff I missed the previous times.
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