Reviews for The Power Within
X-Spider chapter 2 . 9/21/2005
Hey, pretty cool chapter so far. Update soon please.
someone chapter 2 . 5/28/2005
Please write more soon.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
You have the humor portion down pat, but the

power levels and such are really cheesy.
KatBlue chapter 2 . 12/3/2003
i want more. give me chapter. nice and shorter.
KatBlue chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
Sharky that's so funny. I'm son interested in the story. It could totally be a great movie. Keep going. oh, by the way get shorter chapters.
Doc4 chapter 2 . 5/10/2003
This is excellent. I can't wait to see what techniqes you give them. Update, please, I beg of you!
Big-G chapter 2 . 1/28/2003
Very Good, I realy liked this story.

More soon please

Graham Hands
Joshua The Evil Guy chapter 2 . 9/3/2002
Please oh please oh please finish this!

You posted it at the beginning of last month, and if you wrote any of this, it shouldn't be too much work to have another chapter, or even replacement chapter for 2 (because of multiple parts in 1 I assumed multiple parts in 2) by the beginning of THIS month!

Please oh please don't abandon this fic!

-The Evil Guy
Joshua chapter 1 . 9/3/2002
Please oh please oh PLEASE DON'T I repeat DO NOT abandon this! I don't care if you started on it a year ago and only have this much done, this is a GREAT idea and it is a GREAT story, even if it isn't exactly epic and rather short, but it is still good nevertheless and I WANT AN ENDING!

Please (small voice)

-The Evil Guy
Joshua The Evil Guy chapter 1 . 8/29/2002
You ARE going to finish this. Aren't you?

-The Evil Guy
jappeth chapter 2 . 8/14/2002
I love your story and can't wait to read the next chapter. Xander is my favorite character. I love to see him being the stong one.
StoneWolf chapter 2 . 8/10/2002
can n't waite for more
knbnnate chapter 2 . 8/9/2002
Excellent part! Very funny stuff :-). I can't wait for the next installment.
someone chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
Very good please continue very soon.
WBH21C chapter 1 . 8/1/2002
Glad you are working on this great fic again!

More please! (This is called begging.)

Bill
21 | Page 1 2 Next »