Reviews for Helpless |
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TheEliteLabRatsLover chapter 8 . 3/4 this is absolutely everything I could have ever wanted and I cant thank you enough for making it. |
TheEliteLabRatsLover chapter 1 . 3/3 oooh drama! |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2017 Good job with the characterization! Especially the bantering between Arthur and Merlin. Those two are simply the worst (best)! :D Oh, and the whole 'clay doll' thing was a really good idea. I haven't seen that plot point all that often . . . oh, and I like how you managed to write the whole story without giving the witch a name. Interesting. :) Thanks! |
queenofmoondoorswife chapter 8 . 1/23/2017 great! Really enjoyed this! |
DragonGirl725 chapter 8 . 12/29/2016 Great story! |
Aaviaria chapter 8 . 7/1/2016 I just had to say, fantastic story! I loved it and I loved how the characters felt right, like that was exactly what I imagined they say or do! Just brilliant! |
CreativeWing chapter 8 . 8/4/2015 Most satisfying story that I've read yet. Although I would like a little more whump I love how you acually finished the story, with a beautiful and a that-makes-me-smile ending. I highly congratulate you on writing a successful first story and encourage you to keep it up. Best wishes to you and your inspiration. -CreativeWing |
DragonReader99 chapter 8 . 7/16/2015 I loved it! |
HannahDelaware123321 chapter 8 . 8/31/2014 This was a great story! enjoyed reading it! thankyou for the diffrent wump story, totally diffrent from others i have read! good job! |
xBookEaterx chapter 8 . 10/17/2013 LOVED EVERY SINGLE BIT! :D |
MugetsuPipefox chapter 8 . 8/23/2013 Hahaha! Loved the ending. Way to ruin the moment, Merlin. But, then, I guess Arthur would feel like his manliness was at stake if they continued with all those girl feelings XD Great job! |
MugetsuPipefox chapter 7 . 8/23/2013 Yay Freya 3 So sad that they couldn't even hold hands or anything. But, they'll get to be together again one day. Which is a nice thought. Great job! Lots of happy people shall be in the next chapter :3 |
MugetsuPipefox chapter 6 . 8/23/2013 Noooo Kilgaragh! *cries* He's not allowed to die! Not in the show and not here! At least you didn't actually say he died. Now I can insert my own mental imaginary version and pretend it never happened. Go Arthur and knights! Find Merlin! Doing really well :) |
MugetsuPipefox chapter 5 . 8/23/2013 Yes! Go Kilgarragh! Man that dragon is so cool XD Great chapter! |
MugetsuPipefox chapter 3 . 8/23/2013 Oh noes! How can they fight an enemy who could kill him at any moment?! So exciting XD Wake up, Merlin! |