This story is a lot of fun. :) It's not exactly my cup of tea, but I can see why so many people like it. I laughed a lot, and you're an amazing writer!

Ah! I can FEEL the chill morning air! I've been camping a few times, and this feels exactly like it (minus the superhero shenanigans).

"Hey Nat, could you roll down Steve's window?" XD LOL! That whole conversation had me and my sis dying!

I LOVE HOW THOR *YELLS* EVERYTHING HE SAYS! XD "A MERE DOOR WILL NOT STAND BETWEEN US BROTHER!"
This chapter's hilarious! XD

This needs more dialogue! Loki's lines are the best part of the story!

ooh! Loki's getting a haircut! :P

(Again, I love how I can SEE everything! Its so amazing!)
The chapter started and I was like, ooh! Is that Thors lightning?
Of course he cant. And youre welcome! XD
AND its Thor! Yay! :D

So, all of the characters are OOC (1 example: Loki should be more ticked/less nice) but I think you knew that and this is solely for comedy. Good news! It's not the annoying type of OOC. While these don't behave like their original counterparts, they're not annoying, and in themselves they are fantastic characters.
I'm highly entertained reading this. And continuously impressed with how smooth and descriptive the writing is. Plus the dialogue almost carries the whole thing, it is that amazing! Some of the best dialogue I've ever read. Nothing useless or cringy, all clever and witty.

So much sass! I LOVE IT!

Oh Cap! :) Love this!

I checked out the soundtrack 'Sound Advice' and it sounds so silly! Love it.

"Why don't you just chain him to the basement furnace." XD
Oh.. my.. goodness. Loki is here and the way he and Clint rub off each other is so awesome! I LOVE how you write Loki!

Oh my gosh! Loki's sass in this chapter is beautiful!

Yay! It's Loki! (Him being sent to earth is implausible, but this is parody and I like the idea so I don't care. :D)
Ok I would have made Loki put up more of a struggle. There were several things that just didn't sit right with me.
But the visuals! I could SEE everything! And the scene where he's under the table was so well choreographed. It felt like I was actually watching it on tv.

I didn't notice that this was a parody fic, so up until this point I was like, 'wwhhaaaa?' :) Honestly, I would have liked the main plot of the story to be introduced a little quicker, but i'll let it pass due to your short, incredibly engaging chapters.

The dialogue is absolutely FLAWLESS! I love it! I can hear their voices.