dissapointing fight

Its Nakamas not Nakamadas

is it just me or hasent Ace used magic at all in this fanfic

little bit dissapointed that nothing major in plotwise has changed

that was little dissapointing

Percy is The Prefect not Perfect

hope ace can still use Haki

would have been better if the wand was different

this chapter needs editing

This is really good I can’t wait to see what you write next I also hope you go different and wormtail gets captured

why does everyone always like hagrid?

He seems nice yeah but he NEVER gets the point across and doesn't tell harry anything expecting him to know everything even though he already knows that harry has been living in the muggle world told nothing. Its insensitive af what he is doing. He could at least explain things ffs

i still having trouble about why a 12 y.o kid ended up in azkaban for months while reading this chapter. there are no logic that support adult claim for this short of behavior. and if ace still a happy, carefree, disinterested, willful and having no problem about the adults around him, then his death (old life) teach him nothing.

even luffy is able to move on and become more mature for making critical decision (that 2 years interval for his crews to train before gathering again after marineford war arc). and this is ace, he is dead before being reincarnated, and nothing changes (ok maybe a bit, like training more but just for a little), it's just feels wrong.

maybe hes just escaping his past. being a youth again let him enjoying it like his past life. and he mentioned his old family so much.

when sirius mention about fighting dementor with willpower, did ace just forget his haki? those are based on willpower right? he can't use magic because his handcuffs (possibly his devil fruit power too if you want the power come from the same source as his magic), so he can (theoretically) train his haki and not just his physical body.

why did you keep repeating a line with previous chapters? it's kinda Irritating. there are still lots of spelling problem.

your idea of ace focussing more on training his haki and not his spell works is good. because so far, for early school years, the magic they taught were basic and ace didn't see any use of them for battle.

but maybe later you should introduce occlumency so ace would know that there are people whom capable of invading his mind and reading his thoughts.

ah this mistake again. when you need to use "robe" you used "rob" and now you used "robe for "rob".