It was a very nice story, you've displayed their dynamic brillaintly and haven't just had them kiss which many people - me included - tend to do to end a story like this. Nice work, I didn't notice any mistakes and it's well worth the read :)

Such a sweet winter story! Your descriptions were great- I love how Tai can tell everything that Sora is thinking and feeling without her having to say anything. I laughed out loud when I pictured his high-pitched "Stupid Tai!" impression! I enjoy these open-ended stories because you get to imagine how it ends. Great story! :)

Amazing work! I love how all of the descriptions and feelings created such a lovely scene between Tai and Sora! Keep on writing!

This... this was so sad, but beautiful. You're writing style is beautiful and it totally captured my heart. No grammar mistakes, so that's good. I'm guessing that the guy that Sora was originally engaged with is Matt, and I'm glad that the wedding was cancelled or something like that. The ending was so sweet with the snowflakes falling and all. It seems so obvious to me that they both have feelings for each other but they just won't admit it. Honestly, I've got nothing bad to say. This was so good and you really portrayed Tai and Sora perfectly. Keep up the amazing writing, Dagger! You're such a fantastic author! :D