Reviews for Heart of Ice, Fist of Steel |
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Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2013 Please,update:( |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013 Please update3 |
Confuzed-Anime-Fan chapter 1 . 1/8/2013 Cannot wait! Must know what will be tomorrow night at 8! 0.0 |
Rhaized chapter 1 . 1/2/2013 Très bien! I think you beautifully kept both of them in character. I loved the awkwardness that seemed to tug around their heartstrings for the first 3/4 of the story. Though they'd known each other for years, it almost felt like this coffee date was between teenagers that carefully yet subtly addressed their feelings. The end was great; the melting of the ice wall is excellent. Looking forward to more! And good luck :) |
Exhile87 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 Yay for another Aki/Mitsu fic! Great work here, especially that last bit. It gave me warm fuzzies. This is a promising start and I look forward to reading more. One typo I noticed: 'peaks' in the first section should be 'piques'. |
Rally4ever chapter 1 . 12/29/2012 Wow I'm loving this so far my fav Persona pairing of course. Amazingly written please continue. I can so see this. LOL I thought there was more to this story after P3 and before P4: Arena. |
Rydia Pryde chapter 1 . 12/29/2012 YAY! AkiMitsu! Great job keeping them in character. I really enjoyed this and it didn't feel rushed at all. Great start, looking forward to your next update. |