These chapters are too short to really retain my attention, and the constant POV changes are annoying, especially as it's often for just a sentence or two.

I love this setup, glad to hear that you are giving it another look. My only real gripe is a lack of X-23. Logan is adorable when he's playing Papa Bear to Laura.

glad your back! your story is amazeballs! I love it!

this chapters killing me! XD hahahahahahaha!

this story is pretty cool. logan is awesome and I just love how its going so far. please keep going when you can!

Intriguing start with the Strange predicament!

This story has generally been good so far — great in some of the characterization — though I don't really like the PoV switching; I don't feel that there is any added character insight or motivation from it, so it comes across as an arbitrary artistic choice. My biggest gripe is the overwhelming number of typos and spelling errors, but a careful reread should fix that. It just breaks the flow of the story when I have to pause and realize that "in site" is meant to be "insight"; or "any ware", "anywhere".

I'm a very big Wolverine fan, thank you for a story that actually showcases with Wolverine's capable of, not just in terms of hacking and slashing but, being able to strategize and use tactics, I am very sorry to hear about your family tragedy and, I offer my blessings to you and your loved ones; may god always watch over those you care for.

Good story.

looking forward to more. good luck with the family issue.

Okay, let me get this straight. Your grammar and spelling is pretty much perfect as far as I can tell as I haven't found any noticeable mistakes, except one. You. Have. Typed. 'u' Instead of 'you'. How dare you that. You should that 'u' is text message language, otherwise known as idiot language. And you are not an idiot, are you? Why, then, did you us 'u' instead of 'you', it's disgraceful.

I'm sorry I know that this is a flame, but you need to that.

Logan is my favorite character from X-men, and a badass the Dc Universe could use someone like him in their ranks but is he immortal because as far as I know he can die like any other person.

Wolverine crippling a man by torturing him? No that is to much out of character killing him? Sure in a heartbeat, but deliberate torture for no good reason at all? That is not the Wolverine's way

Wolverine and Harley Quinn pairing please! thanks:)

Hey u have a great story here and i will definitely be keeping up can't wait for the next chapter