Reviews for Three Days for Three Words
BlueFan-Gurl chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
So funny, when I found this story I was actually watching the little mermaid
judy chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
this is perfect! please continue!
Daesaster chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
Liked it, but I didn't understand the part where the door crashes to the floor. Why did it do that?
HiyaKitty chapter 7 . 5/24/2013
Very good work! Very subtle and romantic. You could do with being a little more descriptive and making chapters slightly longer, but still very good!
TheJamjam chapter 7 . 5/24/2013
You really need to throw more detail into it. 3/4 of it is speech. There's only a single paragraph that is longer then a line. The story itself is actually pretty good, but you need to try harder! :)
HiyaKitty chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
PB shouldn't be kissing FP's boy! Even if it's one the cheek! Wonder how FP will react
HiyaKitty chapter 5 . 5/24/2013
Very good. Good twist bringing in Peebs
HiyaKitty chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
Good Work ;)
HiyaKitty chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
Good chapter! I would have liked it if maybe the characters sang the songs from The Little Mermaid, like FP could have sang "part of Your World" and PB could have sang "Poor Unfortunate Souls" but it's still a good story non the less.
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Update!
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
Whoa...this is exciting!
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
Ooooooooo, this IS like the little mermaid!
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Well, itIS allworth it.
Good job!
Mr.nin10do chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Perfect
Pb is going to PAY!
The Design Nerd chapter 6 . 5/18/2013
45th review! Now you can update this awesome story...right? Right?!
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