Reviews for Three Days for Three Words |
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BlueFan-Gurl chapter 1 . 11/7/2013 So funny, when I found this story I was actually watching the little mermaid |
judy chapter 7 . 5/25/2013 this is perfect! please continue! |
Daesaster chapter 7 . 5/25/2013 Liked it, but I didn't understand the part where the door crashes to the floor. Why did it do that? |
HiyaKitty chapter 7 . 5/24/2013 Very good work! Very subtle and romantic. You could do with being a little more descriptive and making chapters slightly longer, but still very good! |
TheJamjam chapter 7 . 5/24/2013 You really need to throw more detail into it. 3/4 of it is speech. There's only a single paragraph that is longer then a line. The story itself is actually pretty good, but you need to try harder! :) |
HiyaKitty chapter 6 . 5/24/2013 PB shouldn't be kissing FP's boy! Even if it's one the cheek! Wonder how FP will react |
HiyaKitty chapter 5 . 5/24/2013 Very good. Good twist bringing in Peebs |
HiyaKitty chapter 4 . 5/24/2013 Good Work ;) |
HiyaKitty chapter 3 . 5/24/2013 Good chapter! I would have liked it if maybe the characters sang the songs from The Little Mermaid, like FP could have sang "part of Your World" and PB could have sang "Poor Unfortunate Souls" but it's still a good story non the less. |
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 7 . 5/23/2013 Update! |
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 3 . 5/23/2013 Whoa...this is exciting! |
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 2 . 5/23/2013 Ooooooooo, this IS like the little mermaid! |
Princess Skye Jewel chapter 1 . 5/23/2013 Well, itIS allworth it. Good job! |
Mr.nin10do chapter 7 . 5/23/2013 Perfect Pb is going to PAY! |
The Design Nerd chapter 6 . 5/18/2013 45th review! Now you can update this awesome story...right? Right?! |