| Reviews for A Soul In Chains |
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   Thanatos 2018 chapter 14 . 10/29/2018 ? |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 10/11/2018 Well that was interesting but Tatsuki's so mean to Naruto so cruel |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 10/9/2018 Well that was interesting the Hollow Requiem is awesome as for the paring Tatsuki would be my choice my opinion of her is the same as yours she's my fav pairing for Ichigo also |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 10/9/2018 Well that was interesting so like Ichigo a hollow killed Naruto's parent this time being his dad but unlike Naruto he wasn't born yet |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 10/9/2018 Well that was short but interesting |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 10/9/2018 Well that was entertaining wonder what happens next still I'm curious as to why Naruto's mum killed herself |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 10/9/2018 OK that was amusing weird clock of doom |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 10/9/2018 Well this was interesting wonder what happens next |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 OK that was interesting I wonder why his mum would kill herself that's sad |
| Ezeakel chapter 2 . 8/14/2018 Interesting |
| Ezeakel chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 Nice chapter. |
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 10/30/2017 Interesting chapter and plot and idea |
| Kid Coheed chapter 13 . 10/6/2017 I read through this one recently, the Idea is extremely sound and really really interesting and I hope you do either rewrite it or put it for adoption. Personally I think the Gun form was a bridge to far, and You should of just had Naruto have the gem/pendant somehow double and place them on his hands and have him just fire energy bolts from his hands. I've would of slowly gone to a Clad where Naruto covers his body in Chain raps and then solid armor with Gem Pendants on his hands and chest. But finally I really would like to see more of this rewritten and perhaps a little less comedic but more action-y. I think the biggest weakness is that it was too light hearted at times to really play up the depression, the loneliness that Naruto is supposed to put off. Other than Tatuski many of the other non spiritual aware are rather boring, Keigo and Mosquito take up to much screen time especially for two side side characters who's only real moments are that of the Karakura Raizer Omake. It feels like spinning wheels when two characters who we know are rather useless are the ones chewing the hell out of the page count. |
| kooloowarrior chapter 13 . 9/15/2017 Awww cmon man it was just getting good too... it seems like all bleach crossovers do this |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/28/2017 Don't be sad because it's over. Be happy that it happened. |
