Reviews for Rider Vs Conqueror |
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Guest chapter 27 . 11/7/2019 Somewhere early in it says Valka was taken when he was about 3, and here it is 5 or 6. The latter makes the most sense if Hiccup would have any memories of her. I loved this mother/son chat, it was nice to have someone that he could relate to and still open up to without his "Vikingness" being up for question. |
Guest chapter 29 . 11/10/2018 MOON BLOOD THEY DIDNT CALL THEM PERIODS BAK THEN AND MOST OF THE STRORIES CALL IT MOON BLOOD |
MRADCACA chapter 34 . 8/24/2017 Hello NFS LOVER, I just want to say that this is a really good Fanfic and was wondering why'd you stop it? Did you lose the spark for this or did people say that they didn't like it? If you don't want to talk about it then that's fine by me. I know you last updated this from three years ago and you might not get this but if you do, I want to say that this is a really good story. :) |
Carl Solo chapter 34 . 6/3/2016 This is a great story. I know that you stop this story in 2014 since you star writing (I define my self) that I also be reading . But this story is so great that is going to be a shame to let them unfinished. I hope that on one point you consider continue this story and finished. I like to read the end of this good story thanks |
Carl Solo chapter 33 . 6/3/2016 yes very fun and well done. thanks |
Carl Solo chapter 31 . 6/3/2016 wow this story is great, nice chapter. sorry but I reed the (past defines the future) first. and now I reed this one. and I liked |
Carl Solo chapter 29 . 6/2/2016 well this a great story, I just want to make a remark and let you know that there are some errors in timeline that you used in some of the chapters, and I hope someday if you check the story you can fix them. but I like this history too. thanks |
Carl Solo chapter 27 . 6/2/2016 this is a great story I hope that you continue in some point . |
Carl Solo chapter 7 . 5/31/2016 nice chapter. |
Carl Solo chapter 4 . 5/27/2016 yes this is great story too. |
Carl Solo chapter 1 . 5/27/2016 Ok this story star good. a question how old is hiccup in this story? because is seid in the begining that this story star 6 months after the defeated of the red death but in the end of this chapter seid that hi is thanks |
the hunt's guardian chapter 5 . 1/27/2016 Yeah, hi. I just began reading this story ansld am only on chapter five. I have a complaint on how Astrid is acting. Hiccup said he would be back as soon as possible. All the stuff he had to train in would not have taken a month or a week. Astrid should've known that he was not going to be back by the end of the month. She was completely over reacting. I understand the letter thing but wanting to pitch him off a cliff for not being back by the end of the month or sooner is stupid. |
Kaylara chapter 20 . 10/6/2015 Harsh-but more than deserved! It's all Berk's own fault! |
pointers chapter 19 . 8/23/2015 you do know toothless would have smelled the other nightfury on Drago right? sorry to break the chapter and reality :( |
Sjmhorsegirl chapter 34 . 8/17/2015 I have just read your other fanfic and decided to read this one too once I finished it, so I knew by some of the author notes on those that you weren't going to continue this story. PLEASE continue this story. It's so good. I gotta know how it ends. |