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Weak Naruto

i want issei to ntr naruto cuz you make it seem like everything is about naruto

Your doing way to much, and its all kind of blending together in a bit of a mess. I don't mean to sound rude, but it doesn't mesh well and the story feels really bumpy and aggravating. Be that as it may, it is still a well liked story and I wish you the best of luck in writing it.

If there is one gripe i have with a lot of fan fiction, its the sublimity of almost always having the main leads have the “moral high ground” and then everyone abiding by it. Case in point, naruto interaction with Ares cabin. Sorry but i sincerly doubt that there wouldnt be any resentment to a new comer coming in smashing their cabin and then calling them scum, but they somehow get over it in a day. These are teens, not adults. Kinda unrealistic to me. Hera’s offer to Artemis for knowledge and then you writing expressively that she isnt “that bad”. I dont know how offering someone to have intercourse while your companions watch tied down is good in any sense of the word but aight. Its well written, albeit wonky and forced at times but too “hand shit to naruto and hera” ish if you get what in saying.

Hola soy unos que lleva escuchando tu historia en YouTube pido amablemente que lo permitas y lo siga subiendo porfa No seré tantos de los que te dicen que si es con la trama de la historia pero me gusta la historia el tema el drama toda la cuestión de la historia es magnífica una obra me gusta la historia como la llevas te agradezco los momentos de ocio que me das llegó a la casa y me pongo escucharla y me voy a otro mundo que se lleva todos los pesares de desde plano de enfermedad y muerte y ahorita estamos pasando por eso amablemente te digo permíteme que la siga subiendo por favor soy un típico de típico sujeto larense que le da flojera ver leer por eso amablemente te pido que lo sigas permitiendo que lo sigas sufriendo por favor Posdata creo que soy del Clan nara porque me da flojera leer

si Naruto se casa con Artemisa no se haría inmortal?

Sorry I couldn't review on my account but I just had to leave a review. The way you have interwoven these mythologies and these subtle crossovers just blows my mind. Honestly their were some chapters that seemed to have a random bit of information and then 2 or 3 chapters later, BAM backstory and an explanation. In conclusion keep up the good work sir/mam and I hope that you continue writing

Narutos mother is Hera right?

New book?

Will you be making part 2?

I love the fact that you mentioned Metis! I don't normally see any mention of her in any PJO fics.

Also, I understand his abilities reducing due to lower chakra levels and having to adapt chakra control to a younger body, but he should gain power quickly since he already knows the knowledge portion and just needs the muscle memory back

? Why would he be 9? She said time passes faster in the poj world so he should be older. Like, hundreds of years going by that logic since they said years in poj would be months in Naruto world.

This story is epic! Please write a sequel! You rock at this story writing because this is one of the best stories I've read both fanfiction and printed! You have a way with words so keep writing your stories!

Please start part 2