I don't know what the power of KARP is, but i liked this story. It fits the description of both Ash and Drew very well.

This was so sweet! I just wisjed u wrote wat happened afterwards. Like wen she leaves to see him is she finally gonna tell him and how will he react? I hope u write more and tell me wat happens next. Other than that I thought it was really good.

Kinda rushed but still good. Advanceshippingftw

Nice, you should really consider writing longer pieces, this one was excellent. Keep it up

You should write more, this is good.