This should be a full kili x oc book or even fili x oc

you spelled rivendell wrong

That was supposed to be rated M? More like T. You DO realize M is mature right? It probably should have been a full out sex scene. It was good none the less

I loved it! I hope you make more of these pairings!

adfghjk love so much

love the story

I really would of liked to see some backstory and how she became part of the group. Also cute sexually frustrated moments are adorable and builds up the relationship.

But I really like this, the details are sooo good. I have a crush on Winnie now thank you very much haha also kili is portrayed very well.

This was adorable!

Magnificent! I wish my name was Winnie:D

Awww. That's actually, really, really cute. Are you going to write more?

I loved this and I want more :3

I loved this story. I was so excited to see that some had written a new Kili/OC and I loved Winnie. I know it says it's a one-shot, but I hope you write another part or more Kili/Winnie fanfics; I would definitely read them! :D

Loved it! You have no idea how excited I was when I discovered a story that not only offered Kili/OC action, but smutty goodness too. Well written, great characters and definitely room for sequels! I hope you have opened a door for more Kili/OC fics in the future!

. Awesome

That was intense, honestly! I loved it. You should write another part, like what happens next. Good god I loved that soooo much you have no idea!