I absolutely loathe you for abandoning this

Joham?
Shit...

Wait, this is the second time I read this story and I just realized something. Doesn't the glowing eyes mode that Harry can't remember happening (he mentioned it after the vampire and the ocean) activates when he dies? Does that mean the alcohol killed him? Lol

Harry after going through his little war and two years as an Auror is so utterly STUPID enough to stop in a fight and just stare at someone?
No, sorry, incorrect.

Hmm. I don't really like the Harry/Ginny things here. He what, avoided her entirely for two years, just because? Do we get to find out why he did it or is it going to be left as "he just did."

Type your review what a boring story damn it can't you make it more original

Ooh, neat. A nice reveal here.

So first off, something I recall you mentioning in the first couple chapters that stuck with me: It's absolutely not a bad thing to swap POV back and forth. I'd say it's more difficult than one POV, but not inherently worse in any way. Especially when it's just two characters who are very close. A Song Of Ice And Fire has *dozens* of characters it follows all at once.

This was definitely a good read, though! It has some interesting ideas, with definitely a new take on the MoD thing. Your characters are good, though frustratingly slow to develop.

Honestly, though, I think I would prefer this fic if it was just what I assumed it would be in the first few chapters. Harry completing his parent's bucket list, and Renesmee tagging and helping out/doing it with him. Maybe some Harry/Ginny drama thrown in for good measure before the Harry/Renesmee starts. None of the vampires hunting them or Master Of Death stuff.

But maybe you thought that would be boring, so this is good too.

Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.

Meow it

the story was good except the last chapter..
still hope for some update.

I've never been more ashamed of a story than I am right now. I just wasted an hour of my life reading this and I can't tell you how much I wish I could go back in time and stop myself from reading it.

update please

Awesome story I'm enjoying reading it's sad you never finished it its brilliant!

Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!

The whole "Joham holds the trump card" thing seems really forced and makes not much sense, but I'll hold out and hope for an explanation. There's little quips I disagree with but you tell your story pretty well with minimal errors. Your conversations aren't forced, which is a relief. Hope all goes well and you feel the need to pick this back up

I followed this story but noticed you haven't updated it for almost a a year and a half! Will this continue?