trash fic

natasha used the name natalie in iron man 2

That's a very horrible way to write a conversation

I like the story, it was a little choppy at times and forced also but other than that it was a decent story

Interesting

Thank you for writing! I love this story!

"Merlin is the most similar to us" he says. Oh, Harry.

Lions can't purr.

Excellent! Moving on to rest of the story

Add more chapters please

He's just gonna tell them. Oh no don't think of the laws or anything. I've known these random people that like my baking for a couple of months, that's good enough. And pepper didn't even blink an eye. It was just ''you mutant? No? What ev's. Go magic-ly save my boss/lover. Than he wants to tell Roddy that works for the military (which he specifically said he didnt want the people or military knowing, which is against the law so who cares what he wants its against the law to do it anyway so bad luck if you did wanna tell.) And he knows Roddy even less than tony and pepper. I can't read this. Its not just unlogical, it just wouldn't happen, at least like that and the excuse its fan fiction can only go so far in my head when I'm reading.

That was a good story. Off to read part 2.

Very interesting storyline so far. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

I liked it. Off to read part 2.

This was good I will be off to read Meeting Captain America.