| Reviews for Son of Chaos Book One |
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   is unavailable chapter 12 . 7/5 whats book two called |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/25 So Percy will be a 100000000 times better Grover |
| griff chapter 12 . 6/19 amazing 10/10 |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/14 This one is exactly the same as the one on quotev, are you the same author? |
| Infernius chapter 1 . 6/2 Ok, ok, ok... stop. I think someone need to point this but...where in the fucking universe does CHAOS make a DEAL. And where CHAOS is AS STRONG as all the Olympus GOD. I can take lots of BS hut you can't make me swallow a cactus. Chaos IS THE FUCKING PRIMORDIAL a fart from him is enough to make a new galaxy, so here is my question : in what goddamn univere can't Chaos say "fuck you the Fate" ? Creation is his fucking playground. I need logic to be interested and right in the begin you throw it out the window. Chaos is LITTERALY the only true being that can DO WHATEVER it want and the Fate sister's and Ananke herself will have to suck it up. I was about to read all the book but unless you can grab back my interest I don't think I'll go beyond chap 1 of the first book. I pray for you to continu in your writing and not be disciurage by people like me who critique when they're not happy :). |
| siqifan69 chapter 6 . 5/26 Rucksack is german. Backpack is English |
| siqifan69 chapter 5 . 5/26 Hades had his children before the deal. |
| siqifan69 chapter 5 . 5/26 Will? |
| Ruby chapter 1 . 3/31 x Thalia! |
| ImperialRoman chapter 9 . 3/27 I honestly want to see Ares' reaction. LOL |
| ThatFanfictionTeen chapter 12 . 1/1 What? You marked it complete and just abandoned the story? This is a scam. Don't read this, it's incomplete. Also why so mouch British shit? |
| ThatFanfictionTeen chapter 10 . 1/1 Great fic so far but I hate it when they use "very well" for any characters that has 120 IQ and is old. |
| Jackal chapter 9 . 12/19/2019 As a hoarder and a "lvl1 item carrier to end game" type of person, killing Aphrodite like that just seemed wasteful, would have enslaved her and broke her spirit or something along those lines. Considering that there is outer space, i would just make the Olympian gods my lil soldiers so i can explore the world and then outer space |
| Jackal chapter 2 . 12/19/2019 Why are you making Percy a damned Wizard? Percy is a warrior first, he should have picked up Riptide and he should have cut down both the fury and minotaur, maybe add some flames on the edge of the blade or cover himself in lightning and go berserk but what you did is kinda what Percy doesn't do. Percy always basically trashes the battlefield everytime he fights and basically goes on a rampage. I know the fury and minotaur wouldn't be able to push him to that kind of level but you could have at least made him play with them. On a separate note, does he get like a boost in certain areas? Like how the children of Poseidon have insta-healing and infinite stamina in water? |
| Dude chapter 1 . 12/19/2019 Dude, i haven't read the chapter cos i had to come here and comment first on what i expect. I expect a monstrously powered beast of a Percy Jackson. If he's gonna be a son of Chaos then that means he isn't on the demigod tier level, our boy Percy is gonna be demiprimordial level baby (which is gonna be hard to power scale that cos the other primordial children of chaos at the top of my head was Gaia and Tartarus. Woot |
