| Reviews for naruto of the vizoreds |
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   CyberNinjaKat chapter 1 . 5/6 Careful with run on sentences. I know I have trouble catching them in my own work now and then, but punctuation is crucial. Without it, there is no pause. It just keeps going. |
| Pushi19 chapter 12 . 9/23/2018 Update it soon please |
| Deathtoll1000 chapter 4 . 7/23/2018 Has not as in the game piece part |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/23/2018 You got wounded not you wounded |
| kynan99 chapter 2 . 4/4/2018 Thanks |
| kynan99 chapter 1 . 4/4/2018 Thanks for the awesome story |
| Monster King chapter 12 . 9/25/2016 Hope you finish the story because it would be a shame if you didn't. |
| me chapter 2 . 8/21/2016 you are over complicating things |
| mattcun chapter 12 . 7/7/2016 i cant wait to see the next chapter |
| Aureslifer chapter 1 . 6/16/2016 Awesome and very funny with a nice plot |
| Sl4p chapter 2 . 3/18/2016 Pls give the first chapters a work over, story is nice, punctuation sucks and you mixed in lots of mistakes... Anyways, I really like your plot and the writing, grammar and stuff aside, isn't bad either. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/24/2016 I see no Crossover.. All I see is The SAME UNCREATIVE CLITHE NARUTO FIC |
| Kesharrad chapter 1 . 2/16/2016 No capital letter in the title. That's a big turn off, ya know. |
| Tenma Sosei chapter 8 . 2/11/2016 You should add Rias Gremory and Akeno to Naruto's harem, as Kido spell master far above Momo's level. |
| kazutoxx123 chapter 12 . 2/11/2016 Please continue writing. I have falling in love with this story. |
