Reviews for Coming Home |
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Caroliny Hotchner chapter 2 . 8/15/2019 Adorei sua história. Muito |
MaidenMoonshine chapter 2 . 2/20/2019 I haven't watched this show, but this was cute. |
Miss MaryAnn chapter 2 . 2/15/2013 This story was worth a six month wait, it was really good and caught the relationship between Chin and Kono perfectly. |
Shayla17 chapter 2 . 2/9/2013 Firstly, loved the banter between Steve and Danny; always good stuff! Geez I wouldn't have wanted to be in that room though... and poor Kono... talk about anticipation! I know you don't normally write F/M spankings but I think you did a great job! She's lucky to have him there for her, even if it hurts sometimes. Also, I always LOVE when you put the Hawaiian words/phrases in... so cool! Great story! |
Shayla17 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013 So I realized I hadn't reviewed this story yet... oops! I haven't watched this show in forever but it still thoroughly enjoyed this! Especially this chapter... I forgot how much I love your Steve and Chin stuff... one of my favorite pairings you did during your 100 Days and this made me realize I missed them! Great job with the writing... as usual (: |
accounting professional chapter 2 . 1/17/2013 Great chapter. I loved the interaction between Chin and Kono. I loved how safe Kono felt at the end. |
poohbear123 chapter 2 . 1/16/2013 can't wait for the next one to come. |
poohbear123 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013 awesome story glad to see ya back love your stories |
caseyrn12 chapter 2 . 1/15/2013 ooooh kono was a naughty girl eh..chin didnt even let her use her excuses n reasons..n lori knows something it up but isnt aware of the 'family' dynamic in regards to punishment..n dang even stevie got in trouble eh lol...cute story..wtg |
wandamarie chapter 2 . 1/15/2013 wow i am in joying the story i am all so happy that you are writing angan thanks |
ficwriterjet chapter 2 . 1/14/2013 Thanks so much for writing it for the prompt, and for letting me post it. Loved the story. I know M/F isn't your favorite, but I think you did a nice job with it. I liked the way Chin and Danny worked as a team to keep the younger ones in line. I especially liked the little scene in the locker room where Danny was trying to bandage Steve's hand. Later I found it completely believable that Kono couldn't eat any dinner knowing what was waiting for her. The ending was quite sweet. :) Thanks again. |
Itsmecoon chapter 2 . 1/14/2013 Loved it thanks for sharing! |
accounting professional chapter 1 . 1/14/2013 Good chapter. I loved the ther/son type interaction between Chan and Steve. Please continue this story. |
jgroovydaisy chapter 1 . 1/13/2013 Always enjoy your stories. This is not exception. Love. :) |
wandamarie chapter 1 . 1/13/2013 wow it is a good one shot story keep up the great work |