Adorable!

Weren't they still on the bed at the end

This was extremely cute! I loved how in character you kept them. Thanks so much for sharing it!

This is awesome :-)

Sweet And Romantic, Love It! :D

Wow, you should totally be proud of this.

Especially the way you're able to capture their relationship. They're so comfortable with each other but then you add an extra layer with Soul massaging her feet and Maka giving him a book.

Though the plot has been frequently used, I appreciated the way that you included subtleties to make it your own. It was very artistic in style, like something to read on a quiet day. Your words are very soothing in a way.

Wow.

Don't I sound like a weirdo?