Reviews for A New Path to Follow - AotC AU |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story, It was a beautiful AU! I really loved Doctor Padme, it suited her character really well since she was still helping others. I'm excited to read the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this! Padme's character does seem to work better as a doctor- it fits her personality. I'm excited to go read the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice wrap up, I like how she gets more authority here. Good way to keep the Chancellor in mind and involved, though thank goodness they didn't outright tell him. I wish you could write one shots for some of their missions... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how he makes her feel safe. The love just poured out of this chapter, great job again exploring all of the emotions |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved her dress, sounds just like something from Star Wars Episode II. Their date was so romantic 3 3 Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. I love her testimony so powerful and in character and just like the strong woman she is, bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, yes, Yoda is very good with the Force. I loved how she finally said yes, it was very in character and fitting with the series to have all of the conflict. I like how Anakin is old fashioned with her, fits his reverence of her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, go Yoda! Nice way to wrap that mess up and save her career, very creative as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drama, drama but you make it so realistic and really pull the reader in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job giving details about the surgery. I liked how Yoda helped her find the memory she needed, very cool. The proposal was great, full of emotions |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, go Team Padme, nice legal details there. I like the added drama with Windu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way to create a villain for the story, very well done too with the self-righteousness and arrogance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree with Corde, she is a nice foil to Padme and a great friend, really enriches your story His message was cute and fitting |
![]() ![]() ![]() The character of Corde is a great one, nice way to flesh out your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, way to step up the drama, cool twist though. I like how Yoda offers up the help of the Jedi and how she reacts and how Anakin reacts. very much in character. |