Love the story! The holl episode was great, do you know other stories about John's prison time?

Another cracker of a fic - this episode had me on the edge of my seat! :)

This was wonderfully written. I enjoyed reliving those scene from John's POV.

Great story. He should has told Carter what he truly feel.

Nice, great follow up to that episode.

Loved the episode and love your fic.

And then Donnelly showed up. -_-

Loved this. Very nice little piece about his inner thoughts, especially the bridge scene at the end. :)

Glad you ended it before Donnelly butted in. This was a very interesting background piece to the episode. Thanks for writing.

Nicely written.

Excellent! Love the dance metaphor, and the Don Quixote references!

Great fic!

I liked your story, a chance to see things from john's pov. You seemed to capture john's inner turmoil. His disappointment to the team. Being in soliditary confinement, slowly getting to him. Having to much quiet time to think. Worrying about joss, how all of this was affecting her. How would he and joss handle an interrogation? How to react to seeing elias in the prison yard. John tyring to figure out why donnelly was so obsessed with nailing him. I wondered as much. It had to be something much bigger. Telling joss, he would use the man in the suit, to prove that the cia was operating on u.s. soil. Just how far could donnelly get. The powers that be would quash his little tirade. It was something else, maybe very personal to him. Maybe in the next coming weeks, we will get answers to all of our questions. I would like to read more of your story. Read what happened at the bridge with john and joss.

Excellent, moody piece, so quietly pinpoint in leading us through the layers of feelings during that long day of interrogation at Rikers. I loved this look inside Reese's shifting emotions and calculations as he danced - and staggered - around in unchartered territory. So poignant that this ends on a moment of quiet hope, just before Donnelly arrives. Well done indeed!

This is so amazing! Thank you for sharing!

That "song and dance" move J & J did was worthy of an award; if only Donnelly hadn't been SO obsessed with the Man In The Suit. Finch, Bear, Fusco and J & J make a great team.