finally jill stopped being such a weak p*ssy.. it was getting annoying seeing these dragons get pushed around like little damsels..and they should easily be able to escape these dudes..just fly up outa there

they are dragons damn it i hope they stop being so weak and submissive..they were so badass in the beginning

Hey so it’s been about a year since you updated and I want you to know I still read this story about once a month. I still absolutely adore it and the characters. I hope everything is going well for you and you are well!

So... I just want to let you know that I kind of head canon that the girls raised Roger. Like it was the first time they took human form and “Oh God Jill! Is it supposed to be doing that?” “why won’t it stop crying?!” “HOW CAN SOMETHING SO SMALL POOP SO MUCH!”
Lol it makes me giggle that roger had to deal with two “underage” moms that had no idea what they were doing.

Course I think there were cute bits when they were a happy family and like lots of cuddles and love was given. This probably did not happen but I wanted to let you know what you caused!
~Cue liberty whipping out a scrap book of naked baby roger to show Ace~
And maybe Jill kept something of Rogues to give him? I have no idea, it just makes me happy to imagine.

YAAAAASSSS! Your back! I’m so excited I missed you so much! I checked back every week to see if you updated!

Oh the story is getting good! I can’t wait to see how everything is going to play out. Does Jill have a companion and pet or is it just liberty? Watch out Kidd, Law be creeping on you like a bad marriage!

I can’t wait to see if Ace gets a dragon form, which I assume may happen what with his bloodline and all? I just really want a smack down placed on Azreal
and Zanthor, I think I spelled his name very wrong lol!

Please. Don’t. Stop. This. Story. I’ll die.

Xoxo

Wooooow it's indeed been a long time since we last heard from you. I am glad this story did not end up fading into the background forever. Ill be keeping an eye out, and probably re-reading this story all over again. Welcome back

damn... adrenaline rush... as always, amazing work. I'll probably reread it all over again, too.

Pleas update!~ I really love this story~

Hey I just wanted to check in with you and make sure everything was okay. Lol you ha e no idea how many times I've reread this chapter and just laugh at crocodile and everyone's antics! I'm still completely in love with this story and can't wait till you update again, I hope that you've had a nice summer

Please update! It's soooooo good~

Please please please update! It's a really good story and I can't wait until Kid and Law catch them~

Dear Author,
OH MY GOD! AHHHHH I've been waiting so long to write a review, I wanted to catch up and read everything that I could of your amazing work. I've honestly never read a story this good or intricately detailed or with as much attention ro detail as this one. I absolutely love the way you weave the subplots in and out and the way you develop your characters... DAYUMM! The characters are all soooo amazing and well developed and so very in-character that I am amazed every time I come back and read this story! This is by far my favorite fanfic EVER (and that's saying something lol), and I'm just saying, you should write books or something. The story is just that good and truly AMAZING! I don't think there's enough space here for me to tell all the things I love about it... I just can't wait for the next update! I can't wait til Law and especially Kid ;) find their dragons... they're gonna be all evil and hot and stuff... dang it I'm drooling again... Anyways please keep writing, you're super amazing!
Super sincerely,
Sam :3
P.S. I wish I was a Gifted. That would be so freaking cool! *twinkly eyes*

Oh my god. OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD. Seriously. I can't wait to read more.

I will be entirely honest in that I care a lot less about what the culture of the Gifted (Although it is interesting) than about the connection with the girls to Law and Kid. Seriously, that game of cat and mouse between Law and Jill? DE. LEC. TE. BLE. I mean holy crap. I honestly am curious to see how you spin it so that both pairs end up together, despite the violence both have suffered. I will say that the relationship between Jill and Law is slightly, but only slightly, more believable to me, but I can't tell if that is because I'm a diehard Law fan or because it's true.

Definitely THE most thought out fanfiction I've ever read. Not only the story arc, but the weaving of the multiple characters and points of view, and how well done the characters really are. And no other writer has ever attempted so much CULTURE in their fanfiction. I don't know if you are borrowing it from another story, and honestly I don't care. It feels like it fucking belongs. Plus, Gaelic? Icing on the fucking cake, man.

My only thing that I'll say is that you have a few too many characters involved. My head is spinning going between all the different points of view. I can read it, and you certainly can write it - but as a reader I care a whole lot less about the inner workings of Raftl then I do about what is going on with who I consider to be the five or six main characters.

Plus, I just really wanna see Jill and Lib give in. DO IT. GIVE IN. MUHAHAHAHHAHA.

Either that, or have Ray-san explain the facts of life to them. Worse, have their WATCHERS explain it to them.

O.M.G.

Also, Ray and Shakky are married - it was mentioned briefly in the anime by Shakky, so I'm not surprised if you missed it.

So, i can't help but to wonder what would have happened if Kid and Law had just asked nicely...