Brilliant. You explored their personalities, flaws, and tendencies excellently!

There is good left in him :) Nice work!

Friendship is a beautiful thing :')

I am speechless. That was beautiful.

That was so funny and sweet! Anakin's solution was brilliant!

This is adorable.
I love seeing Anakin interact with little Ahsoka.

Oh my gosh this story was so amazing! You did a really amazing job with it. I find it hard to find such well written stories that have the story lines and plots that appeal to me and you definitley hit the nail on the head with this one. Your writing was beautifully crafted and had really great attention to detail which I really really loved. I also thought you did a really great job with the character dialogue and their overall personalities- it really shines through in this story. I love the Anakin and Ahsoka friendship pairing and this honestly captured them perfectly. It had the right amount of fluff and love in the chapters and then the pain and hurt in that single one. I can't wait to look at your other stories now and read them! I hope you continue to write more Ahsoka/Anakin stories such as this one! Keep it up and great job :)

You're writing is perfect for these characters. You got them down packed; I've read so many fics where everyone is very outwardly emotional and their dynamics are quite weak (and some certain characters are portrayed quite weak...) etc. but you clearly understand that, that wasn't how their relationship was built. The support they had for each other was very subtextual and strong as it was as a master/apprentice (bro/sis) bond forged during wartime. So they show their weaknesses in a different way and are usually quite inward or guarded (which makes it meaningful when they do open up to each other). To top it off, the dialogue seems realistic for the two. The only comments I would make would be to have Ahsoka get her turn at being the pillar of support or her being the one concerned over Anakin as remember she is also quite aware that he is not perfect and has a little bit of a guilt complex. She's his teacher as much as he is hers so it's actually a fairly balanced relationship. But overall: CUTE FICS! Some of the best clone wars ones out there:)

OMFG that was so CUTE

Awe! That's the cutest thing ever!

Loved it can't wait for an update

It's been over a year, and I'm still reeling from that season finale. There are plenty of responses abounding on this site, but it was yours that did it for me-the closure. It emphasized Anakin and Ahsoka's relationship by focusing on the growth in both of them as well as the hurt and guilt. She seems okay, and I love that.

Sweetie, we ALL wish she had stayed.
Maybe she'll come back? Just a thought.
She said she needed to 'sort things out on her own,' maybe she will!

Doctor Who is now not the only show that has made me cry.
It's stupid, but now a cartoon has.
THANKS A LOT LUCAS!
I don't know why they do this to us.
You're a Whovian though? Cool.

The first chapter and this one are the best. Great series.