I reaaaally enjoyed it soooo much

Whaaaa! ️ Please tell me you're writing a sequel!

Am I the only on who got a disturbing metaphor from this, you know the whole being used against your will..doesn't that remind anyone of anything?

Aaaaw... Poor Pitch... Lol

I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this. :)
I have to agree with a few other commenters on a few things. The scene where Pitch finally takes Jack, *claps* well done on managing to keep it PG but still really creepy. Love the familial dynamic between the three main chars, you can really feel the love. :)
Although the spelling errors were a little irritating at times, it didn't really make it hard to read, so don't worry about not having time to fix them. I really liked the whole diamond ice form idea, very cool take on it. I always wondered about whether Jack would get stronger with more believers. lol, died laughing at bunny's prank at the start, although poor Jack on the timing of it. lol, all in all, loved it. Off to check out some of your newer stuff.

Pitch did something. Poor Jack things are going to get weirder.

Oh dear what the heck is happening to Jack.

That was a good prank but Jack was probably shooken up from his nightmare which probably made Bunny's prank more scary. My dad has done it to me before.

Awe poor Jack being alone for a long time is never a good thing. Pitch is a jerk. It makes sense that Jack has fear of drowning.

good story

Very sweet and very beautifully written. Good job. :)

I like papa north

Aw man I loved this story D: I hope there is a sequel! :D

By the way I absolutely love your stories! :D :D :D

i was not expecting jack to curse but it was funny

Is there a squel to this story